1893e1cebc
Hebrews 2:2-3 change sentence structure
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Hebrews 2:2-3 change sentence structure to make conditional clause (verse 2) precede naturally the main one.
2016-05-25 15:45:20 -04:00
a9b86cdda7
Update 06.usfm
2016-05-25 15:42:27 -04:00
8725d6a9a8
Update 06.usfm
2016-05-25 15:38:37 -04:00
f18a4f0a99
Hebrews 1:14 change wording
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Hebrews 1:14 changed "sent out to worship me and to care" to "sent out to minister and to care" since the pronoun "me" is not in the Greek and confusingly refers to God IF he is still the speaker in verse 14 but the quotation marks indicate that now the writer is speaking.
2016-05-25 15:20:57 -04:00
9461dbc12f
Rewrite V13, 15
2016-05-25 15:15:55 -04:00
7ac6831325
Hebrews 1:10 semi-colon to period and new sentence
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Hebrews 1:10 semi-colon to period and new sentence
2016-05-25 15:14:59 -04:00
59e7640236
Hebrews 1:9 semi-colon to comma
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Hebrews 1:9 semi-colon to comma
2016-05-25 15:13:38 -04:00
5f0e04da34
Hebrews 1:8 semi-colon to period and new sentence
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Hebrews 1:8 semi-colon to period and new sentence
2016-05-25 15:12:27 -04:00
b219692814
Hebrews 1:5 semi-colon to comma
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Hebrews 1:5 semi-colon to comma
2016-05-25 15:11:17 -04:00
cea9da7045
V8, 9 rewrite
2016-05-25 14:46:52 -04:00
97a5260ffa
Hebrews 12:8 cut redundant word "children"
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Hebrews 12:8 cut redundant word "children"
2016-05-25 14:43:19 -04:00
70f3d56c7f
Hebrews 11:19 change wording
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Hebrews 11:19 change wording to smooth it out and connect "from the dead" closer to Abraham's "receiving him back.
2016-05-25 14:40:54 -04:00
c75401e950
Hebrews 6:3 change wording number
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Hebrews 6:3 change wording number from plural to singular "these things" to "this"
2016-05-25 14:29:25 -04:00
9bc5cb01bd
James 1:17 change wording
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James 1:17 change "He does not change like shifting shadows." to what you see because he does not change AT ALL.
2016-05-25 14:18:23 -04:00
811d6165c5
James 1:8 removed redundant "person"
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James 1:8 removed redundant "person" after "double-minded" and "a" from before "double-minded"
2016-05-25 14:08:23 -04:00
323fb0b4e6
James 1:5 removed the word "it"
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James 1:5 removed the word "it" from the second use "the one who gives IT generously" since the original shows God as giving EVERYTHING generously, not just "it" = wisdom.
2016-05-25 14:06:39 -04:00
23ce30a274
James 5:6 change wording
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James 5:6 changed "the righteous man, the one who does not" to what you see because the Greek does not put a word for "man" or "person" in that position.
2016-05-25 14:02:46 -04:00
17bb11d545
James 4:1 change wording
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James 4:1 change "among your fellow believers" to "in your members" since this is more literal with the Greek and less interpretive which the UDB does adequately.
2016-05-25 13:58:10 -04:00
Tom Warren
3e304cce55
Corrected
2016-05-25 13:54:35 -04:00
Tom Warren
3f6b7f3fb5
Test
2016-05-25 13:53:22 -04:00
17eb9f90e0
edit punctuation
2016-05-25 13:52:45 -04:00
1b970877fe
Update 08.usfm
2016-05-25 13:27:47 -04:00
70e94e1c81
Update 07.usfm
2016-05-25 13:23:52 -04:00
c30c7c6cb3
Update 05.usfm
2016-05-25 13:14:31 -04:00
9930343aaf
V5 rewrite
2016-05-25 13:03:13 -04:00
cd4cad4bd9
Update 05.usfm
2016-05-25 13:00:19 -04:00
b42a60cf64
Update 05.usfm
2016-05-25 12:59:51 -04:00
9d5c905e46
Update 05.usfm
2016-05-25 12:55:09 -04:00
080a07c44e
Update 05.usfm
2016-05-25 12:44:00 -04:00
e9b20c195d
Update 04.usfm
2016-05-25 12:42:45 -04:00
c810742bae
V1, 2 rewrite
2016-05-25 12:42:35 -04:00
38fcd1d997
Update 05.usfm
2016-05-25 12:34:34 -04:00
3e5549ac1e
V31, 32 rewrite
2016-05-25 11:44:42 -04:00
4cbb823853
Update 05.usfm
2016-05-25 11:39:54 -04:00
9534cf20a6
V28, 29 rewrite
2016-05-25 11:36:40 -04:00
f7cc689b1f
Update 05.usfm
2016-05-25 11:35:35 -04:00
Tom Warren
c42e2ee0f2
Greetings continuity
2016-05-25 11:22:21 -04:00
3a69e56257
V27b rewrite
2016-05-25 11:13:52 -04:00
0df85c58a8
Colossians 2:15 change wording
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Colossians 2:15 change wording from "led them in a victory procession" to what you see because "victory procession" is too interpretive. The Greek word only signifies "celebrate a triumph over"
2016-05-25 10:53:11 -04:00
b34f2d22a8
V20 rewrite
2016-05-25 10:43:01 -04:00
f75981ee6e
Update 01.usfm
2016-05-25 09:55:43 -04:00
e0657c5fb1
Update 01.usfm
2016-05-25 09:55:01 -04:00
7d231ec928
Update 01.usfm
2016-05-25 09:54:31 -04:00
b18fa17234
Update 01.usfm
2016-05-25 09:53:49 -04:00
d1c7affe60
Colossians 1:24 change wording
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Colossians 1:24 change "for his body's sake, which is the church." to "for the sake of his body, which is the church."
2016-05-24 21:54:36 -04:00
3a8c9ed2d6
Colossians 1:22 change wording
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Colossians 1:22 change wording: "God has reconciled" to "he has reconciled" since "God" here is an interpretive insertion.
Also, "in the body of Christ's flesh" becomes "by his physical body,"
Also, "before himself. \v 23 This is providing that you" becomes as you see.
2016-05-24 21:48:21 -04:00
405b1b23e5
Colossians 1:18 change wording
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Colossians 1:18 change wording from "He is the originating authority, the firstborn from of the dead ones, so he has first place among all things." to what you see now. This is closer to the Greek. The phrase "originating authority" is interpretive and not literal.
2016-05-24 21:17:44 -04:00
1a3eceba2a
Colossians 1:18 change wording
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Colossians 1:18 change wording from "head of the church, his body" to "head of the body, the church."
2016-05-24 21:10:47 -04:00
cd3daba668
Update 05.usfm
2016-05-24 20:33:27 -04:00
300a478a64
Update 05.usfm
2016-05-24 20:30:38 -04:00
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