Henry Whitney
597f5392b3
stray line
2016-07-08 13:53:40 -04:00
afbec2c362
Update 02.usfm
2016-07-08 13:52:13 -04:00
a911e36b8d
Romans 6:1-2 change wording
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Romans 6:1-2 change wording
2016-07-08 13:49:58 -04:00
f2fce5e102
Update 05.usfm
2016-07-08 13:47:19 -04:00
2e411b65c1
Romans 5:18 change wording
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Romans 5:18 change wording to avoid limiting Christ's obedience to only his death.
2016-07-08 13:44:17 -04:00
Henry Whitney
267526185c
corrected misspelling
2016-07-08 13:43:38 -04:00
22c556723a
Romans 5:13 change wording
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Romans 5:13 change wording
2016-07-08 13:38:50 -04:00
9a1fbb55c9
Romans 5:12 cut narrative not in text
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Romans 5:12 cut narrative not in text
2016-07-08 13:36:23 -04:00
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Update 04.usfm
2016-07-08 13:34:28 -04:00
98c3276857
Romans 5:10 change wording
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Romans 5:10 change wording
2016-07-08 13:32:52 -04:00
Henry Whitney
a7eb45cd10
specified both valences of "write"
2016-07-08 13:29:24 -04:00
9e2595734d
Romans 5:9 simplify wording
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Romans 5:9 simplify wording and sentence structure
2016-07-08 13:29:09 -04:00
Henry Whitney
856727f81b
zapped extra empty lines
2016-07-08 13:27:32 -04:00
0d39e8372d
Romans 4:25 change wording
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Romans 4:25 change wording
2016-07-08 13:16:59 -04:00
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Romans 4:21 change wording
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Romans 4:21 change wording
2016-07-08 13:13:38 -04:00
5ceb5c03ac
Romans 4:18 simplify wording & order
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Romans 4:18 simplify wording & order of ideas
2016-07-08 13:11:38 -04:00
262e463f19
Romans 4:17 change separate paragraph
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Romans 4:17 change separate paragraph to become part of verse 17. Also simplified the wording.
2016-07-08 13:05:47 -04:00
e138a20f3c
Romans 4:16-17 simplify wording and sentences
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Romans 4:16-17 simplify wording and sentence structure
2016-07-08 13:03:12 -04:00
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Update 04.usfm
2016-07-08 12:54:42 -04:00
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Update 04.usfm
2016-07-08 12:54:06 -04:00
725a53349e
Romans 4:11 simplify wording
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Romans 4:11 simplify wording
2016-07-08 12:52:54 -04:00
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Romans 3:31 cut the imaginary dialog
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Romans 3:31 cut the imaginary dialog
2016-07-08 12:34:38 -04:00
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Romans 3:24 change wording
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Romans 3:24 change wording to reflect the action of Christ for us beyond only his death.
2016-07-08 12:04:06 -04:00
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Update 02.usfm
2016-07-08 12:02:24 -04:00
24b83c7565
Romans 3:21 change wording
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Romans 3:21 change wording for clarity
2016-07-08 12:01:14 -04:00
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Update 02.usfm
2016-07-08 11:59:52 -04:00
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Update 02.usfm
2016-07-08 11:57:00 -04:00
e3750f7dc7
Romans 3:19-20 change wording
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Romans 3:19-20 change wording and punctuation for clarity
2016-07-08 11:54:56 -04:00
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Romans 3:9 cut dialog
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Romans 3:9 cut dialog
2016-07-08 11:35:58 -04:00
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Romans 3:5-8 clear up dialog
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Romans 3:5-8 clear up dialog
2016-07-08 11:30:02 -04:00
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Romans 3:3-4 cut dialog
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Romans 3:3-4 cut imaginary dialog since this is not needed and not in the text
2016-07-08 11:14:21 -04:00
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Romans 3:1-2 change wording
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Romans 3:1-2 change wording from a direct quote (not in the text) and the imaginary dialog.
2016-07-08 11:10:57 -04:00
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Romans 2:25 correct verb number
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Romans 2:25 correct verb number
2016-07-08 11:00:34 -04:00
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Romans 2:24 cut extra sentence
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Romans 2:24 cut extra sentence, "The non-Jews say God must be a hypocrite if he tolerates the behavior of people like you."
2016-07-08 10:59:33 -04:00
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Romans 2:20 cut extra word
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Romans 2:20 cut extra word "in" and change "what" from "you have __ the law __ teaches you"
2016-07-08 10:56:32 -04:00
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Romans 2:16 change wording
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Romans 2:16 change wording to shorten and simplify the sentence structure. The idea of secret is central, not an added feature.
2016-07-08 10:53:15 -04:00
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Romans 2:12 change wording
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Romans 2:12 change wording to shorten the text.
2016-07-08 10:43:22 -04:00
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Romans 2:1 cut added wording
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Romans 2:1 cut added wording that is too interpretive and not in the text at all.
2016-07-08 10:21:44 -04:00
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Romans 1:27 change wording
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Romans 1:27 change wording from, "As a result, God has punished them by sicknesses in their bodies, which is what they deserve." to what you see. To ascribe the agency to God is true ultimately but is too much to read out of the text and is likely offensive to some. The more immediate agency is the physical effects of such behavior that have become obvious in our context as well.
2016-07-08 10:14:32 -04:00
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Rom 1:14 change wording
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Romans 1:14 change the loaded terms "educated and to those who are uneducated" to what you see. There are many MTTs and their readers who may not have much formal education, but still have good discretion and ability to learn. Besides, this does not convey the idea of "wise" and "foolish" in the text.
2016-07-08 09:52:45 -04:00
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Update 04.usfm
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reversed previous change:
"who meets"
changed back to
"that meets"
(because it is "the group ... that meets")
2016-07-08 08:07:25 -05:00
9838b750b5
Update 04.usfm
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"that meets"
changed to:
"who meet"
2016-07-08 08:03:36 -05:00
Henry Whitney
febc048de0
corrected misspelling
2016-07-08 07:45:29 -04:00
ba35245061
Update 02.usfm
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"But he is like... "
changed to:
"He is like..."
"But" is not there and is not needed, and in fact seems to confuse.
2016-07-08 06:22:52 -05:00
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Update 24.usfm
2016-07-07 17:06:47 -04:00
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Update 23.usfm
2016-07-07 17:05:23 -04:00
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Update 23.usfm
2016-07-07 17:04:09 -04:00
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Update 23.usfm
2016-07-07 17:03:25 -04:00
Henry Whitney
45cd299dfa
3:19 "who" for "that" relative pronoun
2016-07-07 16:49:58 -04:00
e400b0b43b
Update 06.usfm
2016-07-07 16:36:27 -04:00
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