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1930 Commits

Author SHA1 Message Date
Tom Warren 4b527b099f Various Jewish council changes 2016-08-12 11:31:05 -04:00
Henry Whitney 9278f61187 Mat 19:19
Neighbor is every person
2016-08-12 11:15:46 -04:00
Henry Whitney 4705f5e945 Mat 23:25-26
Followed suggestion in https://github.com/Door43/udb-en/issues/100
2016-08-12 11:10:57 -04:00
Henry Whitney 30ad8a4cbd Mat 8:34
synonym for ULB "begged"
2016-08-12 10:21:21 -04:00
Henry Whitney 94262b394c Mat 1:6
"Out-of her of Uriah" seems to include, however tersely or cryptically,
the idea that she was Uriah’s rightful wife when Solomon was conceived;
to add that Uriah was dead ("widow") softens the effect by saying too
much.
2016-08-12 10:17:19 -04:00
Henry Whitney a40a5f0863 Mat 5:12
de-awkwarded
2016-08-12 09:56:25 -04:00
Henry Whitney 160ea6a8aa Eco 30:28
Unpacked passive
2016-08-12 09:51:45 -04:00
Henry Whitney 5f04e6496a Mrk 14:71
streamlined
2016-08-12 09:25:36 -04:00
Henry Whitney 410a69d651 Mat 15:34, 36
The loaves were small by our standards, but not by theirs. UDB did well
to note that the fish were cooked ahead of time.
2016-08-12 09:23:24 -04:00
Henry Whitney d6706a5f88 Mat 17:25
excessive implied information removed
2016-08-12 08:58:18 -04:00
Henry Whitney 9800065768 Act 20:14
Wrong city in text.
2016-08-12 08:58:18 -04:00
Tom Warren f8a2c077bf Great Tribulation
This term is not easily rendered as "trouble caused by other people." It
should be kept as is.
2016-08-12 08:55:37 -04:00
Tom Warren b3d38d067e Sync conflict resolved 2016-08-12 08:53:49 -04:00
Tom Warren a313eb3cd2 CLeared for sync
# Conflicts:
#	02-EXO/36.usfm
2016-08-12 08:51:26 -04:00
Tom Warren d245cfed89 craftsmen spoke 2016-08-12 08:49:59 -04:00
Henry Whitney d10957495c Mat 18:9
zapped "you"
2016-08-12 08:49:35 -04:00
Henry Whitney b001976d48 Mat 15:8
Added not
2016-08-12 08:49:35 -04:00
Henry Whitney a971046951 Mark 14:31
Stray lines
Fixed heretical typo.
2016-08-12 08:49:35 -04:00
Tom Warren 48af5838c5 craftsmen 2016-08-11 18:17:20 -04:00
Tom Warren c483132ca5 craftsmen 2016-08-11 18:07:30 -04:00
Henry Whitney 0e63ec925f stray lines 2016-08-11 18:04:56 -04:00
Henry Whitney 8d99841890 Mrk 5:13
clearer rendering
2016-08-11 17:53:59 -04:00
Henry Whitney 4a62ba1fd7 Gen
Stray lines

Moved "Almighty" to ULB so can match tW list and UDB rendering to UDB.
2016-08-11 17:41:13 -04:00
Tom Warren e6d29a7ed4 Speaker 2016-08-11 17:26:42 -04:00
Tom Warren edaeb6c30d Chunk divide 2016-08-11 17:24:55 -04:00
Tom Warren 6a65dbf3cb Wise of heart 2016-08-11 17:20:45 -04:00
Henry Whitney eff6b78a67 Eco 30:34
Provides alternate understanding of agency. TN explains difference
between ULB and UDB.
2016-08-11 17:16:31 -04:00
Tom Warren a6e60f0f5b those who worked on the sacred tent 2016-08-11 17:06:20 -04:00
Tom Warren 8042eabbf5 Winged creatures 2016-08-11 16:11:37 -04:00
Henry Whitney 325e19994d Eco 30:28, 32-33
Conformed v. 28 to ULB and extended secondary quote to v. 33 per ULB.
2016-08-11 15:49:34 -04:00
aaronfenlason 8b8fb5fac5 Changed "make love" to "sleep" in v. 26. 2016-08-11 14:27:21 -05:00
Henry Whitney 21e719fa6b stray lines 2016-08-11 14:49:52 -04:00
Henry Whitney 2efe05be32 Rev 15:6 rephrased to match v. 1 2016-08-11 14:39:09 -04:00
Henry Whitney 8a6afccff9 Rev 15:1
shortened
2016-08-11 14:28:20 -04:00
Henry Whitney 1463720726 Rev 12:10
Shortened.
2016-08-11 14:23:54 -04:00
Henry Whitney 204c9b1bec stray lines 2016-08-11 14:05:13 -04:00
Christine Jarka 9e433ed344 remove space after sat in v15 2016-08-11 13:16:00 -04:00
Henry Whitney fb2f5ad115 Exo 4:27
Added change of scene marker per p2 note.
2016-08-11 12:39:18 -04:00
Henry Whitney d341fc8ad4 Eco 4:1, 9
Reconciled versions
2016-08-11 12:34:19 -04:00
Henry Whitney a3ef56f83f exo 3:19
matches ULB. Note will give possible meanings.
2016-08-11 12:03:38 -04:00
Tom Warren 4ae3b1b1bc Spirit 2016-08-11 11:18:04 -04:00
Hanker10 9a8e909689 Numbers 9:18 clarified wording
Numbers 9:18 clarified wording
2016-08-10 19:17:29 -04:00
Hanker10 ba25067ada Numbers 9:14 change to required participation
Numbers 9:14 change wording so the foreigners is to be required to participate in the passover. Also, note that these are "settled foreigners," those that have made themselves a part of Israel. The Hebrew has a special term for these as opposed to the temporary visitor.
2016-08-10 19:13:52 -04:00
Hanker10 99ebcdca1b Numbers 7 whole chapter
Numbers 7 whole chapter: hyphenated "one-year-old male lambs" because phrasal adjectives are hyphenated before the noun but not after. Also many typos with first letter of words that were replaced with a period after the previous word and a space where the first letter should have been.
2016-08-10 18:37:14 -04:00
Henry Whitney 5c569eff78 Gen 18:32
moved UDBism to UDB
2016-08-10 16:58:07 -04:00
Henry Whitney 20c4a327fb Eco 30:29
per GitHub
2016-08-10 16:58:07 -04:00
Hanker10 8dba692e0e Numbers 6:24-26 change wording
Numbers 6:24-26 change wording to more accurately render the nature of the blessing
2016-08-10 16:09:56 -04:00
Henry Whitney 1aaa077b4c Exo 30:16
Tried to match ULB.
2016-08-10 14:37:19 -04:00
pohlig 49cba62b4b Update 05.usfm 2016-08-10 14:29:29 -04:00
Henry Whitney c556d2274d From GitHub notices 2016-08-10 14:20:27 -04:00