Henry Whitney
ab1a8ca559
typo
2016-07-12 16:43:35 -04:00
b29e30e7dd
1 Cor 3:4 change wording
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1 Cor 3:4 change wording: "tearing the church into pieces" is an assumption here. This is probably true, but Paul is working up to this evaluation of the Corinthians. It is too early to let that cat out of the bag here.
2016-07-12 15:57:30 -04:00
c1ceab7596
1 Cor 3:2 change "meat" to "solid food"
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1 Cor 3:2 change "meat" to "solid food"
2016-07-12 15:53:39 -04:00
eccbb0a764
1 Cor 2:15 change one word
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1 Cor 2:15 change one word: "judgment" to "evaluate" since this will avoid the connotation (at least for English speakers) of patronizing dominance over others.
2016-07-12 15:50:30 -04:00
45b66a3ef9
1 Cor 2:3 change wording
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1 Cor 2:3 change wording since there is no indication the weakness was physical. There is also no indication that Paul's trembling was because of enemies. Many say it was because of the awesome responsibility he felt weighing on him and/or because he had just come from Athens where his presentation bombed.
2016-07-12 15:12:16 -04:00
Henry Whitney
54279cf480
κοπιαω has element of difficulty absent in UDB
2016-07-12 14:17:49 -04:00
Henry Whitney
3f2d3b6613
resolved ambiguity of "look"
2016-07-12 14:16:37 -04:00
6c66e17fcb
1 Cor 1:25 change confusing wording
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1 Cor 1:25 change confusing wording. God is not foolish or weak but appears so to the worldly.
2016-07-12 13:57:32 -04:00
aa98f27228
1 Cor 1:18 change "know" to "understand"
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1 Cor 1:18 change "know" to "understand"
2016-07-12 13:51:33 -04:00
b24ab0ccef
1 Cor 1:17 confusing structure changed
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1 Cor 1:17 confusing structure changed
2016-07-12 13:49:51 -04:00
8793409dce
1 Cor 1:10 change wording
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1 Cor 1:10 change wording. "this" to "your" since there is no prior reference to what the argument is.
2016-07-12 13:36:54 -04:00
36ee701aa5
1 Cor 1:9 change wording
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1 Cor 1:9 change wording to avoid the connotation that God's keeping of the promise is only in the future. The original is a statement of fact.
2016-07-12 13:32:29 -04:00
c781d3c30a
1 Cor 1:7 change wording
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1 Cor 1:7 change wording to avoid the connotation that
2016-07-12 13:28:07 -04:00
c488916e01
1 Cor 1:6 change wording
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1 Cor 1:6 change wording to avoid the idea that the confirmation was done by the Corinthians
2016-07-12 13:23:01 -04:00
f29116fbe7
1 Cor 1:5 change wording
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1 Cor 1:5 change wording at the end of the verse. "to speak his truth and to know God" is too restrictive. The speech and the knowledge are general, not just theological.
2016-07-12 10:49:12 -04:00
Henry Whitney
2e2e55f7f6
corrected correction
2016-07-11 16:45:26 -04:00
Henry Whitney
75771b7f2c
removed passive
2016-07-11 16:45:04 -04:00
Henry Whitney
f6f427fa00
3:21-22 clarification
2016-07-11 16:20:54 -04:00
Henry Whitney
62b8179b53
3:18-19 cleanup
2016-07-11 15:26:40 -04:00
Henry Whitney
ccb4d3a6b9
zapped bad commas
2016-07-11 15:22:29 -04:00
Henry Whitney
7a4171025d
3:15 made complete sentence
2016-07-11 15:19:26 -04:00
Henry Whitney
bd9f6e6b98
3:14-15 explicating logic
2016-07-11 15:17:22 -04:00
Henry Whitney
5988458b9e
building materials
2016-07-11 14:30:55 -04:00
Henry Whitney
c2158424e7
the "building" is not a "dwelling"
2016-07-11 12:53:04 -04:00
Henry Whitney
6097f7a528
concretized "dwelling"
2016-07-11 12:49:52 -04:00
Henry Whitney
bc950793f1
connectors
2016-07-11 12:35:53 -04:00
Henry Whitney
370db91ffc
smoothed out clauses
2016-07-11 12:35:53 -04:00
Henry Whitney
d4d6f599de
more concrete vocabulary
2016-07-11 11:59:14 -04:00
Henry Whitney
0e1c52d7a8
"of glory" modifies "lord" rather than telling what people would do
2016-07-11 11:59:14 -04:00
Henry Whitney
5078809e1c
Attempted de-figurativization
2016-07-11 10:24:00 -04:00
Henry Whitney
a496fe9cc9
2:3 Restructured to remove awkwardness
2016-07-11 09:56:33 -04:00
Henry Whitney
017b4d00f2
removed comma splice
2016-07-08 16:47:51 -04:00
Henry Whitney
15d85fed92
spurious comma
2016-07-08 16:40:43 -04:00
Henry Whitney
060a05f383
spurious comma
2016-07-08 16:40:43 -04:00
Henry Whitney
29207ff4a2
1:27 smoothed out grammar
2016-07-08 16:15:34 -04:00
Henry Whitney
9e413fd5b3
1:24 restored TFT
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To say that "Christ is his power and the [his?] wisdom" is highly
abstract.
2016-07-08 15:52:51 -04:00
Henry Whitney
ebd6cd4888
1:20 clarification
2016-07-08 15:21:27 -04:00
Henry Whitney
ae987df147
1:17 clarification
2016-07-08 15:01:28 -04:00
Henry Whitney
6eb86aa978
zapped double spaces
2016-07-08 14:57:38 -04:00
Henry Whitney
12109f4bb8
comma
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The comma denotes that Paul can say that he gives thanks because of the
grace. No comma denotes that the grace is the reason he gives thanks.
2016-07-08 13:55:07 -04:00
Henry Whitney
597f5392b3
stray line
2016-07-08 13:53:40 -04:00
Henry Whitney
267526185c
corrected misspelling
2016-07-08 13:43:38 -04:00
Henry Whitney
a7eb45cd10
specified both valences of "write"
2016-07-08 13:29:24 -04:00
Henry Whitney
856727f81b
zapped extra empty lines
2016-07-08 13:27:32 -04:00
Tom Warren
45bcde799f
baptism for the dead
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commentary in the text
2016-06-29 06:33:45 -04:00
Tom Warren
c6a36137aa
Clarity on crowns
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and olive leaves
2016-06-28 23:46:35 -04:00
Tom Warren
b567b6cb5f
Simplify
2016-06-28 06:47:02 -04:00
Tom Warren
0feca203e8
Sea of Reeds
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continuity
2016-06-28 04:12:11 -04:00
Henry Whitney
3a7d17fee6
Lowercasing mid-sentence "Scriptur"
2016-06-20 16:25:02 -04:00
59e3a372a6
Update 08.usfm
2016-05-19 13:37:47 -04:00
4f75acea14
Update 01.usfm
2016-05-19 13:30:21 -04:00
f4a879882f
Update 01.usfm
2016-05-19 13:28:22 -04:00
47268a0ab6
1Co 12:1 UDB
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Removed double-space from line.
2016-05-11 09:18:55 -04:00
fd542ee83a
1Co 11:34 UDB
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Removed double-space from line.
2016-05-11 09:17:49 -04:00
Henry Whitney
5551b82649
Update 12.usfm
2016-05-05 10:40:51 +05:45
e0dae6e4c6
Update 15.usfm
2016-04-22 14:39:46 -04:00
187db5c0a4
Update 13.usfm
2016-04-22 12:23:04 -04:00
5ff639f45b
Update 13.usfm
2016-04-22 12:21:32 -04:00
55a1862e25
V1 sea of Reeds
2016-04-14 16:12:36 -04:00
e3fd5a5d05
Added README.md for each book with links to door43.org
2016-04-05 15:56:40 +00:00
78b7b614f7
Initial commit from Etherpad
2016-04-01 21:07:40 +00:00
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