en_tn_condensed/rev/11/11.md

three and a half days

"3 full days and one half day" or "3.5 days" or "3 1/2 days." See how you translated this in Revelation 11:9. (See: rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-numbers)

a breath of life from God will enter them

The ability to breathe is spoken of as if it were something that can go into people. Alternate translation: "God will cause the two witnesses to breathe again and live" (See: rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metaphor)

Great fear will fall on those who see them

Fear is spoken of as if it is a object that can fall on people. Alternate translation: "Those who see them will be extremely afraid" (See: rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metaphor)