en_tn_condensed/mrk/10/30.md

there is no one who has left ... who will not receive

This can be stated positively. AT: "Everyone who has left ... will receive" (See: rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-doublenegatives and rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-litotes)

this world

"this life" or "this present age"

brothers, and sisters, and mothers, and children

Like the list in verse 29, this describes the family in general. The word "fathers" is missing in verse 30, but it does not significantly change the meaning.

with persecutions, and in the world to come, eternal life

This can be reworded so that the ideas in the abstract noun "persecution" are expressed with the verb "persecute." Because the sentence is so long and complicated, "will receive" can be repeated. AT: "and even though people persecute them, in the world to come, they will receive eternal life" (See: rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-abstractnouns)

in the world to come

"in the future world" or "in the future