en_tn_condensed/num/06/05.md

vow of consecration

"vow of dedication"

no razor is to be used on his head

This can be stated in active form. Alternate translation: "no one is to use a razor on his head" (See: rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-activepassive)

the days of his consecration to Yahweh

The word "consecration" is an abstract noun that can be expressed as a verb. Alternate translation: "the days that he has separated himself to Yahweh" or "the days that he has dedicated himself to Yahweh" (See: rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-abstractnouns)

to Yahweh are fulfilled

This can be stated in active form. Alternate translation: "to Yahweh are complete" (See: rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-activepassive)

He must be set apart to Yahweh

This can be stated in active form. Alternate translation: "He must set himself apart to Yahweh" (See: rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-activepassive)