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they begged him

"the unclean spirits begged Jesus"

he allowed them

It may be helpful to state clearly what Jesus allowed them to do. AT: "Jesus allowed the unclean spirits to do what they asked permission to do" (See: rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-explicit)

they rushed

"the pigs rushed"

into the sea, and about two thousand pigs drowned in the sea

You can make this a separate sentence: "into the sea. There were about two thousand pigs, and they drowned in the sea"

about two thousand pigs

"about 2,000 pigs" (See: rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-numbers)

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