From ef29297f58d8e69c5881d1a699710ad76d695e06 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Obiwon Date: Sun, 26 Nov 2023 18:11:14 +0000 Subject: [PATCH] Update 'lev/20/18.md' --- lev/20/18.md | 8 ++++---- 1 file changed, 4 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-) diff --git a/lev/20/18.md b/lev/20/18.md index 52ae58b2d9..2f10aa8c8b 100644 --- a/lev/20/18.md +++ b/lev/20/18.md @@ -1,6 +1,6 @@ # must be cut off from -A person being excluded from his community is spoken of as if he had been cut off from his people, as one would cut a piece of cloth or cut a branch from a tree. This can be translated in active form. See how you translated this idea in [Leviticus 7:20](../07/20.md). Alternate translation: "that person may no longer live among his people" or "you must separate that person from his people" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-metaphor]] and [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-activepassive]]) +"that person may no longer live among his people" or "you must separate that person from his people" # menstrual period @@ -8,13 +8,13 @@ the time every month when a woman bleeds from her womb # he has uncovered her flow, the fountain of her blood -This phrase compares having sex with a woman during her menstrual period to removing the cover off of something that should remain hidden. The fact that this was a shameful thing to do can be stated clearly. Alternate translation: "he has done a shameful thing by uncovering the flow of her blood" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-metaphor]] and [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-explicit]]) +"he has done a shameful thing by uncovering the flow of her blood" # a man lies with a woman -This is a euphemism. Alternate translation: "a man has sexual relations with a woman" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-euphemism]]) +"a man has sexual relations with a woman" # Both the man and woman must be cut off -It can be stated clearly why this must be done. Alternate translation: "Because they have done this shameful thing, both the man and woman must be cut off" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-explicit]]) +"Because they have done this shameful thing, both the man and woman must be cut off"