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-# I advanced
+# I advanced in Judaism beyond many
 
-This metaphor pictures Paul as being ahead of other Jews his age in their goal to be perfect Jews.
-
-# those who were my own age
-
-"the Jewish people who are the same age as I am"
+"I practiced Judaism better than many" or "I followed the Jewish religion better than many
 
 # my fathers