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-# I will judge him by plague and blood
+# With plague and blood I will enter into judgment with him,
 
 Here "blood" is a metonym for injury and death. Alternate translation: "I will judge him by causing him to be sick and by sending soldiers to kill him" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-metonymy]])
 
-# overflowing rain and hailstones and burning sulfur I will rain down upon him
+# I will rain on him and on his troops, and on the many nations with him—a torrential downpour, hailstones, fire and sulfur.
 
-It may be helpful to change the order of this sentence. Alternate translation: "I will rain down overflowing rain and hailstones and burning sulfur upon him"
+It may be helpful to change the order of this sentence. Alternate translation: "I will rain down overflowing rain and hailstones, fire, and burning sulfur upon him"
 
 # hailstones