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From: JohnH <john_hutchins@wycliffeassociates.org>
Date: Tue, 27 Oct 2020 20:22:46 +0000
Subject: [PATCH] Updated notes to match ULB

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 This refers to things that are done on earth. See how you translated this in [Ecclesiastes 1:3](../01/03.md). Alternate translation: "on the earth" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-idiom]])
 
-# The race does not belong to ... The battle does not belong to
+# the race is not to the swift, nor is the battle to the strong
 
-"The race is not always won by ... The battle is not always won by"
+"the race is not always won by the swift, nor is the battle always won by the strong"
 
-# Bread
+# the swift ... the strong ... the wise ... the intelligent
+These words are used to describe persons with those qualities. Alternate translation: "the quickest person ... the strongest person ... the wisest person ... the mose intelligent person" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-nominaladj]]) 
 
-Here "Bread" refers to food in general. Alternate translation: "Food" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-metonymy]])
+# but time and chance happen to them all
 
-# time and chance affect them all
+This is an idiom. It means that all people experience things that they do not expect, are out of their control, and may not seem fair or right. Alternate translation: "but at certain times, unexpected things happen to them all" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-idiom]])
 
-This is an idiom. Alternate translation: "what happens and when it happens affect them all" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-idiom]])
 
-# affect them all
-
-"affects all these things." Here the words "them all" refer to race, battle, bread, riches, and favor.