en_tn_condensed/2sa/11/01.md

# It came about in the springtime

"It happened in the springtime." This introduces a new event in the story line. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/writing-newevent]])

# at the time

"at the time of year"

# David sent out Joab, his servants, and all the army of Israel

David sent them out to war. This can be stated clearly. Also, the word "his" refers to David. Alternate translation: "David sent Joab, his servants, and all the army of Israel to war" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-explicit]])

# the army of Ammon

"the Ammonite army"

# Rabbah

This is the name of a city. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-names]])
initial v6 rc conversion 2017-06-21 20:50:04 +00:00			`# It came about in the springtime`
added v2 tn converted to an rc 2017-06-21 20:47:54 +00:00
Changed "storyline" to "story line" 2017-08-24 12:53:20 +00:00			`"It happened in the springtime." This introduces a new event in the story line. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/writing-newevent]])`
initial v6 rc conversion 2017-06-21 20:50:04 +00:00
			`# at the time`

			`"at the time of year"`

			`# David sent out Joab, his servants, and all the army of Israel`

Replace all AT: with Alternate translation: 2018-02-10 00:34:10 +00:00			`David sent them out to war. This can be stated clearly. Also, the word "his" refers to David. Alternate translation: "David sent Joab, his servants, and all the army of Israel to war" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-explicit]])`
initial v6 rc conversion 2017-06-21 20:50:04 +00:00
			`# the army of Ammon`

			`"the Ammonite army"`

			`# Rabbah`

added tw to notes 2017-06-24 00:15:21 +00:00			`This is the name of a city. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-names]])`