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# the second seal

"the next seal" or "seal number two" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-ordinal]])

# the second living creature

"the next living creature" or "living creature number two" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-ordinal]])

# came out—fiery red

This can the stated as a second sentence. AT: "came out. It was red like fire" or "came out. It was bright red"

# To its rider was given permission

This can be stated with an active verb. AT: "God gave permission to its rider" or "Its rider received person" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-activepassive]])

# This rider was given a huge sword

This can be stated with an active verb. AT: "This rider received a huge sword" or "God gave this rider a huge sword" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-activepassive]])
initial v6 rc conversion 2017-06-21 20:50:04 +00:00			`# the second seal`
Initial commit of translationNotes 2016-02-23 02:42:46 +00:00
initial v6 rc conversion 2017-06-21 20:50:04 +00:00			`"the next seal" or "seal number two" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-ordinal]])`
Initial commit of translationNotes 2016-02-23 02:42:46 +00:00
initial v6 rc conversion 2017-06-21 20:50:04 +00:00			`# the second living creature`
Initial commit of translationNotes 2016-02-23 02:42:46 +00:00
initial v6 rc conversion 2017-06-21 20:50:04 +00:00			`"the next living creature" or "living creature number two" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-ordinal]])`
added v1 tn converted to an rc 2017-06-21 20:45:09 +00:00
initial v6 rc conversion 2017-06-21 20:50:04 +00:00			`# came out—fiery red`
added v1 tn converted to an rc 2017-06-21 20:45:09 +00:00
initial v6 rc conversion 2017-06-21 20:50:04 +00:00			`This can the stated as a second sentence. AT: "came out. It was red like fire" or "came out. It was bright red"`

			`# To its rider was given permission`

			`This can be stated with an active verb. AT: "God gave permission to its rider" or "Its rider received person" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-activepassive]])`

			`# This rider was given a huge sword`

			`This can be stated with an active verb. AT: "This rider received a huge sword" or "God gave this rider a huge sword" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-activepassive]])`