en_tn_condensed/gen/24/32.md

# So the man came to the house

The word "came" can be translated as "went." (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-go]])

# he unloaded the camels

It is not clear who did this work. This may be stated in active form. Alternate translation: "Laban's servants unloaded the camels" or "the camels were unloaded" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-activepassive]])

# The camels were given straw and feed, and water was provided

This does not say who did the work. If you state this in active form use "Laban's servants" as the subject. Alternate translation: "Laban's servants gave straw and feed to the camels, and they provided water" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-activepassive]])

# to wash his feet ... him

"for Abraham's servant and the men who were with him to wash their feet"
4th pass at tNotes reformatting - Genesis only 2017-12-04 17:26:39 +00:00			`# So the man came to the house`

			`The word "came" can be translated as "went." (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-go]])`

			`# he unloaded the camels`

Replace all AT: with Alternate translation: 2018-02-10 00:34:10 +00:00			`It is not clear who did this work. This may be stated in active form. Alternate translation: "Laban's servants unloaded the camels" or "the camels were unloaded" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-activepassive]])`
4th pass at tNotes reformatting - Genesis only 2017-12-04 17:26:39 +00:00
			`# The camels were given straw and feed, and water was provided`

Replace all AT: with Alternate translation: 2018-02-10 00:34:10 +00:00			`This does not say who did the work. If you state this in active form use "Laban's servants" as the subject. Alternate translation: "Laban's servants gave straw and feed to the camels, and they provided water" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-activepassive]])`
4th pass at tNotes reformatting - Genesis only 2017-12-04 17:26:39 +00:00
			`# to wash his feet ... him`

			`"for Abraham's servant and the men who were with him to wash their feet"`