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# came out—fiery red

This can the stated as a second sentence. Alternate translation: "came out. It was red like fire" or "came out. It was bright red"

# To its rider was given permission

This can be stated with an active verb. Alternate translation: "God gave permission to its rider" or "Its rider received person" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-activepassive]])

# This rider was given a huge sword

This can be stated with an active verb. Alternate translation: "This rider received a huge sword" or "God gave this rider a huge sword" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-activepassive]])

# a huge sword

"a very large sword" or "a great sword"
Remainder of books formated per verse 2017-12-12 06:13:24 +00:00			`# came out—fiery red`

Replace all AT: with Alternate translation: 2018-02-10 00:34:10 +00:00			`This can the stated as a second sentence. Alternate translation: "came out. It was red like fire" or "came out. It was bright red"`
Remainder of books formated per verse 2017-12-12 06:13:24 +00:00
			`# To its rider was given permission`

Replace all AT: with Alternate translation: 2018-02-10 00:34:10 +00:00			`This can be stated with an active verb. Alternate translation: "God gave permission to its rider" or "Its rider received person" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-activepassive]])`
Remainder of books formated per verse 2017-12-12 06:13:24 +00:00
			`# This rider was given a huge sword`

Replace all AT: with Alternate translation: 2018-02-10 00:34:10 +00:00			`This can be stated with an active verb. Alternate translation: "This rider received a huge sword" or "God gave this rider a huge sword" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-activepassive]])`
Remainder of books formated per verse 2017-12-12 06:13:24 +00:00
			`# a huge sword`

			`"a very large sword" or "a great sword"`