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# Notice also that ships ... are steered by a very small rudder

A ship is like a truck that floats on water. A rudder is a flat piece of wood or metal at the back of the ship, used to control where it goes. The word "rudder" could also be translated as "tool."

# are driven by strong winds,

This can be stated in active form. Alternate translation: "strong winds push them, they" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-activepassive]])

# are steered by a very small rudder to wherever the pilot desires

"have a small tool that a person can use to control where the ship goes"
Remainder of books formated per verse 2017-12-12 06:13:24 +00:00			`# Notice also that ships ... are steered by a very small rudder`

			`A ship is like a truck that floats on water. A rudder is a flat piece of wood or metal at the back of the ship, used to control where it goes. The word "rudder" could also be translated as "tool."`

			`# are driven by strong winds,`

Replace all AT: with Alternate translation: 2018-02-10 00:34:10 +00:00			`This can be stated in active form. Alternate translation: "strong winds push them, they" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-activepassive]])`
Remainder of books formated per verse 2017-12-12 06:13:24 +00:00
			`# are steered by a very small rudder to wherever the pilot desires`

			`"have a small tool that a person can use to control where the ship goes"`