Commit Graph

286 Commits

Author SHA1 Message Date
Tom Warren 0fc53d8a28 Commas 2017-01-31 10:54:13 -05:00
Tom Warren 650da0ae36 valley not Valley 2017-01-31 10:46:33 -05:00
Tom Warren 48d6225a3a Checks on "And ... " 2017-01-30 15:15:35 -05:00
Tom Warren e30ee85cce Larry Sallee continuity issues 2017-01-27 11:04:11 -05:00
Tom Warren de840ed412 one more 2016-11-10 11:21:58 -05:00
Tom Warren 0cb652c80a prose in lists 2016-11-10 11:20:16 -05:00
Tom Warren ac8ccc46f6 editing in place 2016-11-10 11:13:27 -05:00
Tom Warren eb59c9f033 cleaning up 2CH 10:14 2016-11-10 11:00:36 -05:00
Tom Warren 7240f8994e cleaning up 2016-11-10 10:54:23 -05:00
Henry Whitney be370447b9 errant spaces 2016-11-04 17:12:37 -04:00
Tom Warren ba2d0ef3a8 hand them over for continuity 2016-11-01 13:51:18 -04:00
Tom Warren 800ac28c25 Continuity issues 2016-10-31 11:24:08 -04:00
Tom Warren f8f5e32a5d in the sight of Yahweh
continuity issues galore.
2016-10-25 14:21:04 -04:00
Henry Whitney 23a7b904af 1sa 2:14; 2ch 35:13
More common spelling of cauldron.
2016-10-25 13:17:12 -04:00
Tom Warren c479642b71 ULB chunks 2016-10-13 11:02:25 -04:00
Tom Warren 6cf0e6e9de Yahweh, the God of Israel
Toying with this or the other
Yahweh the God of Israel ..... ambiguous
2016-10-10 15:13:47 -04:00
Tom Warren 74e16b6f7b Corrections in the line of dedicate 2016-10-10 10:53:59 -04:00
Tom Warren 9353c81149 Changes according to form 2016-10-10 10:05:47 -04:00
Tom Warren ab70829a79 Changes along 2016-10-10 09:27:47 -04:00
Tom Warren a096038142 Fire
Pass through the fire into putting into the fire (for MTT help)
2016-10-06 11:01:30 -04:00
Tom Warren d1478ee61a Changes of sorts 2016-10-05 15:45:06 -04:00
Tom Warren 9fe3e87437 dedicated 2016-10-05 14:54:04 -04:00
Tom Warren bdf9ce6146 changes 2016-10-05 11:06:02 -04:00
Tom Warren 6cede2130e Following naming convention 2016-10-04 15:05:43 -04:00
Tom Warren bfd57c1ca5 Dedicated 2016-10-04 14:37:32 -04:00
Tom Warren 5fadb0fc6c changes 2016-10-03 10:51:01 -04:00
Tom Warren 537468f559 Reader reports and submissions 2016-09-28 10:46:25 -04:00
Tom Warren 3889fb753c Reader Reports 2016-09-28 10:23:08 -04:00
Tom Warren b5ee64883c Assorted 2016-09-26 16:02:17 -04:00
Tom Warren 690114b5a6 Various
David my father, not David, my father
2016-09-22 11:42:26 -04:00
Tom Warren a3d43ddcd2 corrections on Jere et al 2016-09-20 10:56:11 -04:00
lrsallee 724bced17c 2Ch 32:5 ULB - added missing footnote close marker 2016-09-20 10:09:44 -04:00
Tom Warren 9ff7429006 2CH edits
Mostly from Bram, and mine
2016-09-19 12:50:13 -04:00
Tom Warren 0dd78338d3 Sundry 2016-09-19 12:28:52 -04:00
Tom Warren b8bfd3b985 Sundry and more 2016-09-19 12:10:38 -04:00
Tom Warren 68dad4a435 Sundry and annon 2016-09-19 11:51:06 -04:00
Tom Warren 6d2bc79a82 Bram's Notes on 2 CHR
My review and implementation. 2 Chr gets a C minus.  Better after Bram's
notes.
2016-09-19 11:22:40 -04:00
BramvandenHeuvel a534a48a71 V18 ; to , 2016-09-19 11:21:12 +02:00
BramvandenHeuvel 8be0e30fcb V3 delete , 2016-09-19 11:11:20 +02:00
BramvandenHeuvel 47d13221b2 V1 ; to , 2016-09-19 11:10:22 +02:00
BramvandenHeuvel 40590f3686 Updated quotes 2016-09-19 11:03:11 +02:00
BramvandenHeuvel 996ff38092 V22 : to , 2016-09-19 10:56:38 +02:00
BramvandenHeuvel e62f0d2f87 V10 ; to , 2016-09-19 10:35:11 +02:00
BramvandenHeuvel a27cb3d02a V7 ; to , 2016-09-19 10:34:19 +02:00
BramvandenHeuvel 9f5b7f8d0e V28 update punctuation 2016-09-19 10:21:08 +02:00
BramvandenHeuvel b70b00a6d4 Update quotes again 2016-09-19 10:06:08 +02:00
BramvandenHeuvel 0d69018b17 Updated quotes 2016-09-19 10:03:21 +02:00
BramvandenHeuvel 509cb99b3b V18 update punctuation and "all the whole of" 2016-09-19 09:32:45 +02:00
Hanker10 40a73ea80c 2 CH 36:20 change wording
2 CH 36:20 change wording from "the kingdom of Persia happened." to "the kingdom of Persia rose to power." - BBE, NET, NIV2011
2016-09-18 20:10:42 -04:00
Hanker10 b719c7f232 2 CH 35:7 remove commas that break the flow
2 CH 35:7 remove commas that break the flow of thought.
2016-09-18 20:06:41 -04:00
Hanker10 1c4428db68 2 CH 35:6 change "dedicated" to "dedicate"
2 CH 35:6 change "dedicated" to "dedicate"
2016-09-18 20:03:36 -04:00
Hanker10 bf8c76fb8d 2 CH 34:11 remove unnecessary commas
2 CH 34:11 remove unnecessary commas that break the flow of thought
2016-09-18 19:12:54 -04:00
Hanker10 78828a9641 2 CH 34:4 removed obnoxious comma
2 CH 34:4 removed obnoxious comma after "the cast metal figures"
2016-09-18 19:10:30 -04:00
Hanker10 70ac3064b4 2 CH 34:3 added comma after "twelfth year"
2 CH 34:3 added comma after "twelfth year"
2016-09-18 19:06:09 -04:00
Hanker10 b9b521ee6a 2 CH 33:7 cut extra "about" duplicated in 7b
2 CH 33:7 cut extra "about" duplicated in 7b
2016-09-18 09:23:21 -04:00
Hanker10 1119948ff4 2 CH 31:11 cut extra "for"
2 CH 31:11 cut extra "for" bad grammar at "commanded FOR storerooms to be built"
2016-09-18 09:16:55 -04:00
Hanker10 873f951496 2 CH 30:11 cut extra comma
2 CH 30:11 cut extra comma
2016-09-18 09:13:57 -04:00
Hanker10 e05d957c19 2 CH 30:5 cut extra "it" from "the great numbers
2 CH 30:5 cut extra "it" from "the great numbers that IT had been"
2016-09-18 09:10:49 -04:00
Hanker10 dd6143459b 2 Ch 28:12-13 divide sentence
2 Ch 28:12-13 divide sentence and drop semicolon at end of verse 12 to make the grammar much easier
2016-09-17 14:45:11 -04:00
Hanker10 bdee4f4d2b 2 Ch 26:21 cut extra commas
2 Ch 26:21 cut extra commas
2016-09-17 14:33:32 -04:00
Hanker10 1b630853e2 2 CH 26:13 cut extra commas
2 CH 26:13 cut extra commas
2016-09-17 14:29:44 -04:00
Hanker10 5647512b44 2 CH 26:10 "watch towers" to "watchtowers"
2 CH 26:10 "watch towers" to "watchtowers"
2016-09-17 14:25:57 -04:00
Hanker10 c28daa87e4 2 CH 25:16 cut comma after "destroy you"
2 CH 25:16 cut comma after "destroy you"
2016-09-17 14:24:33 -04:00
Hanker10 b0a9e61178 2 CH 24:10 drop extra comma
2 CH 24:10 drop extra comma
2016-09-17 14:15:08 -04:00
Hanker10 1fd43d0d30 2 CH 23:9 cut extra commas
2 CH 23:9 cut extra commas & replace "which" with "that"
2016-09-17 14:06:23 -04:00
Hanker10 b054ff9ee0 2 CH 21:9 cut comma after "Edomites"
2 CH 21:9 cut comma after "Edomites"
2016-09-17 14:00:15 -04:00
Hanker10 a171a0d909 2 CH 21:3 fix spelling of "have given" to "had given"
2 CH 21:3 fix spelling of "have given" to "had given"
2016-09-17 13:56:21 -04:00
Hanker10 f2ea59616b 2 CH 20:14 add commas for appositionals
2 CH 20:14 added commas for appositionals behind the name "Jahaziel"
2016-09-17 12:18:41 -04:00
Hanker10 d0e9c9fd6e 2 CH 20:10 cut extra commas after "Mount Seir" and
2 CH 20:10 cut extra commas after "Mount Seir" and "invade"
2016-09-17 12:14:48 -04:00
Hanker10 a5d40b7a8e 2 CH 13:22 replace "and" with comma
2 CH 13:22 replace "and" with comma
2016-09-17 12:02:49 -04:00
Hanker10 2e4317daf4 2 CH 13:11 add "on" before "the pure table"
2 CH 13:11 add "on" before "the pure table"
2016-09-17 11:58:59 -04:00
Hanker10 0d07f0a677 2 CH 9:31 fix punctuation and add "him"
2 CH 9:31 delete comma -- and add "him" -- and divide sentence before "Rehoboam."
2016-09-17 11:27:55 -04:00
Hanker10 76861d73dd 2 CH 9:24 remove extra "and" before "clothes"
2 CH 9:24 remove extra "and" before "clothes"
2016-09-17 11:24:57 -04:00
Hanker10 b08300995a 2 CH 9:2 change wording from "told" to "answered"
2 CH 9:2 change wording from "told" to "answered." "Told" is a hold-over from the ASV.
2016-09-17 11:20:42 -04:00
Hanker10 65bd294b61 2 CH 8:18 fix wording
2 CH 8:18 fix wording "they went to Ophir went servants of Solomon" to "to Ophir WITH servants of Solomon"
2016-09-17 11:17:19 -04:00
Hanker10 ae7431ac60 2 CH 7:13 change period to comma
2 CH 7:13 change period to comma since this is not an end to this sentence and verse 14 begins with the result clause.
2016-09-17 10:32:17 -04:00
BramvandenHeuvel 091b9d84b0 V26 ; to , 2016-09-15 21:20:22 +02:00
BramvandenHeuvel 04a35d3973 V10 ; to , 2016-09-15 20:48:31 +02:00
BramvandenHeuvel a0a08e48dd V8 "dedicated to Yahweh" -> "dedicated to himself" 2016-09-15 20:45:19 +02:00
BramvandenHeuvel beec59137b V6 "your" to "you" 2016-09-15 20:39:05 +02:00
BramvandenHeuvel 5e1b5313a3 V36 ; to , 2016-09-15 20:12:40 +02:00
BramvandenHeuvel 40e7d8580e V34 ; to , 2016-09-15 20:11:55 +02:00
BramvandenHeuvel d33afd7dd1 V25-26 update punctuation 2016-09-15 19:17:07 +02:00
BramvandenHeuvel e9abc16c9e V24, updated punctuation 2016-09-15 19:15:47 +02:00
BramvandenHeuvel 4c9ac09641 V21 deleted , 2016-09-15 19:14:23 +02:00
BramvandenHeuvel 549b8cca10 V9 added , 2016-09-15 19:03:45 +02:00
BramvandenHeuvel 23f3dde037 V27 ; to , 2016-09-15 16:27:20 +02:00
BramvandenHeuvel 2c9f25f242 V13 ; to , 2016-09-15 16:19:43 +02:00
BramvandenHeuvel beda6637e8 V11 "send" to "Send" (full sentence after : ) 2016-09-15 16:17:11 +02:00
BramvandenHeuvel abe20f3d5b v21 ; to , 2016-09-15 16:03:34 +02:00
BramvandenHeuvel fee7fc7a17 V20 "drive" to "drove" 2016-09-15 16:02:43 +02:00
BramvandenHeuvel 237fff33e6 V14, second — 2016-09-15 15:58:29 +02:00
BramvandenHeuvel d785164c73 V23 son of 2016-09-15 15:44:52 +02:00
BramvandenHeuvel 802d111294 V16 "Stop." to "Stop!" 2016-09-15 15:31:11 +02:00
BramvandenHeuvel e07b1ff613 V8 ; to , 2016-09-15 15:17:04 +02:00
BramvandenHeuvel d0254541c1 V20 updated quotes 2016-09-15 14:48:31 +02:00
BramvandenHeuvel 80c80f0f53 V13 ; to , 2016-09-15 14:24:15 +02:00
BramvandenHeuvel b9421aa6e3 V8 ; to , 2016-09-15 14:22:29 +02:00
BramvandenHeuvel d8fa5d96a9 V5 ; to , 2016-09-15 14:13:51 +02:00
BramvandenHeuvel 3a2ba4cfde V1 ; to , 2016-09-15 13:50:03 +02:00