From c521c5c2229f869daea51285d0a34e11e8974614 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Susan Quigley <susan_quigley@wycliffeassociates.org> Date: Fri, 11 May 2018 14:54:28 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 01/10] Snippet mismatch Missing comma --- act/14/15.md | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/act/14/15.md b/act/14/15.md index fd02cd6462..376865c94d 100644 --- a/act/14/15.md +++ b/act/14/15.md @@ -6,7 +6,7 @@ Barnabas and Paul are rebuking the people for trying to sacrifice to them. Alter "worshiping us" -# We also are human beings with the same nature as you +# We also are human beings, with the same nature as you By this statement, Barnabas and Paul are saying that they are not gods. Alternate translation: "We are just human beings like you. We are not gods!" From f7bafa82a3a6d1fc91dee1585229b0837b88ba52 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Susan Quigley <susan_quigley@wycliffeassociates.org> Date: Fri, 11 May 2018 15:20:06 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 02/10] Snippet Update --- php/02/15.md | 8 ++++---- 1 file changed, 4 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-) diff --git a/php/02/15.md b/php/02/15.md index d599ec21de..e7c12b388c 100644 --- a/php/02/15.md +++ b/php/02/15.md @@ -2,11 +2,11 @@ The words "blameless" and "pure" are very similar in meaning and are used together to strenghten the idea. Alternate translation: "completely innocent" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-doublet]]) -# so that you may shine as lights in the world +# in the middle of a crooked and depraved generation -Light represents goodness and truth. Shining as lights in the world represents living in a good and righteous way so that people in the world can see that God is good and true. Alternate translation: "so that you will be like lights in the world" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metaphor]]) +The words "crooked" and "depraved" are used together to emphasize that the people are very sinful. Alternate translation: "among very sinful people" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-doublet]]) -# in the middle of a crooked and depraved generation, in which you shine as lights in the world +# in which you shine as lights in the world -Here the word "world" refers to the people of the world. The words "crooked" and "depraved" are used together to emphasize that the people are very sinful. Alternate translation: "in the world, among people who are very sinful" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-doublet]]) +Shining as lights in the world represents living in a good and righteous way so that people in the world can see that God is good and true. Alternate translation: "among whom your righteous lives are like lights in the world" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metaphor]]) From 396bae023a031e2fcb795362c02d0114e7d16d1c Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: John Hutchins <theologyjohn@noreply.door43.org> Date: Fri, 11 May 2018 18:30:23 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 03/10] tN issue 1118 --- jhn/14/intro.md | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/jhn/14/intro.md b/jhn/14/intro.md index b2d4041f59..a8939f7ebd 100644 --- a/jhn/14/intro.md +++ b/jhn/14/intro.md @@ -8,7 +8,7 @@ Jesus used these words to speak of heaven, where God lives, not of the temple. ( ##### The Holy Spirit ##### -Jesus told his disciples that he would send the Holy Spirit to them. The Holy Spirit is the Comforter ([John 14:16](../../jhn/14/16.md)) who is always with God's people to help them and to speak to God for them, He is also the Spirit of truth ([John 14:17](../../jhn/14/17.md)) who tells God's people what is true about God so they know him better and serve him well. (See: [[rc://en/tw/dict/bible/kt/holyspirit]]) +Jesus told his disciples that he would send the Holy Spirit to them. The Holy Spirit is the Comforter ([John 14:16](../../jhn/14/16.md)) who is always with God's people to help them and to speak to God for them. He is also the Spirit of truth ([John 14:17](../../jhn/14/17.md)) who tells God's people what is true about God so they know him better and serve him well. (See: [[rc://en/tw/dict/bible/kt/holyspirit]]) ## Links: ## From 3aeb2dc2d90930e58b1ef4b1e940963f34cb8e4c Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: John Hutchins <theologyjohn@noreply.door43.org> Date: Fri, 11 May 2018 18:56:11 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 04/10] tN issue 1119 --- jhn/14/04.md | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/jhn/14/04.md b/jhn/14/04.md index 79f1f09f81..a50ac06ada 100644 --- a/jhn/14/04.md +++ b/jhn/14/04.md @@ -1,4 +1,4 @@ # the way -This is a metaphor that has these possible meanings 1) "the way to God" or 2) "the one who takes people to God." (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metaphor]]) +Possible meanings of this metaphor are 1) "the way to God" or 2) "the one who takes people to God." (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metaphor]]) From 0e3bc8f02b0b3dd7a34fcc25ef3d0c02b51c09c2 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: John Hutchins <theologyjohn@noreply.door43.org> Date: Fri, 11 May 2018 19:06:06 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 05/10] tN issue 1120 --- jhn/14/06.md | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/jhn/14/06.md b/jhn/14/06.md index 36d3aa9e26..e2b4631eb3 100644 --- a/jhn/14/06.md +++ b/jhn/14/06.md @@ -1,6 +1,6 @@ # the truth -This is a metaphor that has these possible meanings 1) "the true person" or 2) "the one who speaks true words about God." (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metaphor]]) +Possible meanings of this metaphor are 1) "the true person" or 2) "the one who speaks true words about God." (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metaphor]]) # the life From 00363912127ff27c898d941de5cbbec6355108fe Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: John Hutchins <theologyjohn@noreply.door43.org> Date: Fri, 11 May 2018 19:19:23 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 06/10] tN issue 1121 --- jhn/14/16.md | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/jhn/14/16.md b/jhn/14/16.md index 1731f990ed..9cb3de4f52 100644 --- a/jhn/14/16.md +++ b/jhn/14/16.md @@ -1,4 +1,4 @@ -# Comforter +# another Comforter This refers to the Holy Spirit. From 7f7b87d53d6c6e3fb0c991f4b759a7a73defa9da Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: John Hutchins <theologyjohn@noreply.door43.org> Date: Fri, 11 May 2018 19:22:04 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 07/10] tN issue 1122 --- jhn/14/17.md | 4 ++-- 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-) diff --git a/jhn/14/17.md b/jhn/14/17.md index 452c5ffc6b..95747bcae2 100644 --- a/jhn/14/17.md +++ b/jhn/14/17.md @@ -2,7 +2,7 @@ This refers to the Holy Spirit who teaches people what is true about God. -# The world cannot receive him +# The world cannot receive him because it does not -Here the "world" is a metonym that refers to the people who oppose God. Alternate translation: "The unbelieving people in this world will never welcome him" or "Those who oppose God will not accept him" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metonymy]]) +Here the "world" is a metonym that refers to the people who oppose God. Alternate translation: "The unbelieving people in this world will never welcome him because they do not" or "Those who oppose God will not accept him because they do not" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metonymy]]) From 513e8af4a4b18c75d3e122eb6331d88825c8608d Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: John Hutchins <theologyjohn@noreply.door43.org> Date: Fri, 11 May 2018 19:35:29 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 08/10] tN issue 14:22 --- jhn/14/22.md | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/jhn/14/22.md b/jhn/14/22.md index e171fa38e7..affca3fcea 100644 --- a/jhn/14/22.md +++ b/jhn/14/22.md @@ -4,7 +4,7 @@ This refers to another disciple whose name was Judas, not to the disciple who wa # why is it that you will show yourself to us -Here the word "show" refers to revealing how wonderful Jesus is. Alternate translation: "Why will you reveal yourself only to us" or "Why will you only let us see how wonderful you are?" +Here the word "show" refers to revealing how wonderful Jesus is. Alternate translation: "why will you reveal yourself only to us" or "why will you only let us see how wonderful you are" # not to the world From 80308c67ef7c97ac76ebe9a744bebf7d0f9454a4 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: John Hutchins <theologyjohn@noreply.door43.org> Date: Fri, 11 May 2018 19:44:55 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 09/10] tN issue 1124 --- jhn/14/30.md | 6 +++--- 1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-) diff --git a/jhn/14/30.md b/jhn/14/30.md index f7384396df..180b729bff 100644 --- a/jhn/14/30.md +++ b/jhn/14/30.md @@ -1,8 +1,8 @@ -# ruler of this world +# the ruler of this world is -Here "ruler" refers to Satan. See how you translated this in [John 12:31](../12/31.md). Alternate translation: "Satan who rules this world" +Here "ruler" refers to Satan. See how you translated this in [John 12:31](../12/31.md). Alternate translation: "Satan, who rules this world, is" -# ruler ... is coming +# the ruler ... is coming Here Jesus implies that Satan is coming to attack him. Alternate translation: "Satan is coming to attack me" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-explicit]]) From 4cf2791da518eabf838c2672764b57c6fababaca Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Bob Johnson <bobj@noreply.door43.org> Date: Tue, 15 May 2018 10:53:20 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 10/10] Snippet update per ULB issue # 1784 --- rev/12/01.md | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/rev/12/01.md b/rev/12/01.md index a0e3cdfb91..b8336ac8e3 100644 --- a/rev/12/01.md +++ b/rev/12/01.md @@ -6,7 +6,7 @@ John begins to describe a woman who appears in his vision. This can be stated in active form. Alternate translation: "A great sign appeared in heaven" or "I, John, saw a great sign in heaven" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-activepassive]]) -# a woman clothed with the sun, and with the moon under her feet +# a woman clothed with the sun, with the moon under her feet This can be stated in active form. Alternate translation: "A woman who was wearing the sun and had the moon under her feet" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-activepassive]])