FD issues chapters 17, 18, 19, 20

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 \v 7 But the angel said to me, "Why are you astonished? I will explain to you the meaning of the woman and of the beast that is carrying her, the beast that has the seven heads and the ten horns.
 
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-\v 8 The beast you saw existed, does not exist now, but is about to come up from the bottomless pit. Then it will go on to destruction. Those who live on the earth, those whose names have not been written in the Book of Life since the foundation of the world—they will be astounded when they see the beast that existed, does not exist now, but is about to come.
+\v 8 The beast you saw existed, does not exist now, and is about to come up from the bottomless pit. Then it will go on to destruction. Those who live on the earth, those whose names have not been written in the Book of Life since the foundation of the world—they will be astounded when they see the beast that existed, does not exist now, but is about to come.
 
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 \v 9 This calls for a mind that has wisdom. The seven heads are seven hills on which the woman is seated.
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 \v 12 The ten horns that you saw are ten kings who have not yet received a kingdom, but they will receive authority as kings for one hour together with the beast.
 \v 13 These are of one mind, and they give over their power and authority to the beast.
-\v 14 They will wage war against the Lamb. But the Lamb will conquer them because he is Lord of lords and King of kings—and with him are the called ones, the chosen ones, and the faithful ones."
+\v 14 They will wage war against the Lamb. But the Lamb will conquer them because he is Lord of lords and King of kings—and those with him are the called, chosen, and faithful ones."
 
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 \v 15 The angel said to me, "The waters you saw, where the prostitute is seated, are peoples, multitudes, nations, and languages.
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-\v 11 The merchants of the earth weep and mourn for her, since no one buys her merchandise anymore—
+\v 11 The merchants of the earth weep and mourn for her since no one buys their merchandise anymore—
 \v 12 merchandise of gold, silver, precious stone, pearls, fine linen, purple, silk, scarlet, all kinds of scented wood, every vessel of ivory, every vessel made of most precious wood, bronze, iron, marble,
 \v 13 cinnamon, spice, incense, myrrh, frankincense, wine, oil, fine flour, wheat, cattle and sheep, horses and chariots, and slaves and human souls.
 
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 \q3 precious jewels, and pearls!
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 \v 17 In a single hour all that wealth has been wasted."
-\m Every ship's captain, every seafaring man, sailors, and all whose living is made from the sea, stood off at a distance.
+\m Every ship's captain, every seafaring man, sailors, and all whose living is made from the sea stood off at a distance.
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 \q "Hallelujah!
 \q The smoke rises from her forever and ever."
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-\v 4 The twenty-four elders and the four living creatures fell down and worshiped God who was seated on the throne. They were saying,
+\v 4 The twenty-four elders and the four living creatures fell down and worshiped God, who was seated on the throne. They were saying,
 \q "Amen. Hallelujah!"
 
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-\v 11 Then I saw a great white throne and the one who is seated on it. The earth and the heaven fled away from his presence, but there was no place for them to go.
+\v 11 Then I saw a great white throne and the one who is seated on it. The earth and the heavens fled away from his presence, but there was no place for them to go.
 \v 12 I saw the dead—the mighty and the unimportant—standing before the throne, and the books were opened. Then another book was opened—the Book of Life. The dead were judged by what was recorded in the books, according to their deeds.
 
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