From Susan Quigley

14-2CH/24.usfm

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-\v 23 It came about at the end of the year, that the army of the Aram came up against Joash. They came to Judah and Jerusalem; they killed all the leaders of the people and sent all the plunder from them to the king of Damascus.
+\v 23 It came about at the end of the year, that the army of Aram came up against Joash. They came to Judah and Jerusalem; they killed all the leaders of the people and sent all the plunder from them to the king of Damascus.
-\v 24 The army of the Arameans had come with a small army, but Yahweh gave them victory over a very great army, because Judah had forsaken Yahweh, the God of their ancestors. In this way the Arameans brought judgment on Joash.
+\v 24 Although the army of the Arameans had come with only a few soldiers, Yahweh gave them victory over a very great army, because Judah had forsaken Yahweh, the God of their ancestors. In this way the Arameans brought judgment on Joash.
 
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14-2CH/25.usfm

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 \v 1 Amaziah was twenty-five years old when he began to reign; he reigned twenty-nine years in Jerusalem. His mother's name was Jehoaddan, of Jerusalem.
-\v 2 He did what was right in the eyes of Yahweh, but not with a perfectly devoted heart.
+\v 2 He did what was right in the eyes of Yahweh, but not with a whole heart.
 
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 \v 3 It came about that as soon as his rule was well established, he killed the servants who had murdered his father, the king.

14-2CH/26.usfm

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 \v 16 But when Uzziah had become powerful, his heart was lifted up so that he acted corruptly; he trespassed against Yahweh, his God, for he went into the house of Yahweh to burn incense on the altar of incense.
 \v 17 Azariah, the priest, went in after him, and with him eighty priests of Yahweh, who were brave men.
-\v 18 They resisted Uzziah, the king, and said to him, "It is not for you, Uzziah, to burn incense to Yahweh, but for the priests, the sons of Aaron, who are consecrated to burn incense. Go out of the holy place, for you have unfaithful and you will not be honored by Yahweh God."
+\v 18 They resisted Uzziah, the king, and said to him, "It is not for you, Uzziah, to burn incense to Yahweh, but for the priests, the sons of Aaron, who are consecrated to burn incense. Go out of the holy place, for you have been unfaithful and you will not be honored by Yahweh God."
 
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 \v 19 Then Uzziah became angry. He was holding a censer in his hand to burn incense. While he was angry with the priests, leprosy broke out on his forehead before the priests in the house of Yahweh, beside the altar of incense.
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 \v 21 Uzziah, the king, was a leper to the day of his death and lived in a separate house since he was a leper, for he was cut off from the house of Yahweh. Jotham, his son, was over the king's house and ruled the people of the land.
 
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-\v 22 As for the other matters concerning Uzziah, first and last, are in what Isaiah son of Amoz, the prophet, wrote.
+\v 22 The other matters concerning Uzziah, from first to last, were recorded by the prophet Isaiah son of Amoz.
-\v 23 So Uzziah slept with his ancestors; they buried him with his ancestors in a burial ground that belonged to the Kings, for they said, "He is a leper." Jotham, his son, became king in his place.
+\v 23 So Uzziah slept with his ancestors; they buried him with his ancestors in a burial ground that belonged to the kings, for they said, "He is a leper." Jotham, his son, became king in his place.