From 182b7250ede74540a55da6c24b2e2a3774d699f0 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Tom Warren Date: Wed, 27 Jul 2016 11:26:38 -0400 Subject: [PATCH] rework --- 04-NUM/02.usfm | 56 +++++++++++++++++++++++++------------------------- 04-NUM/03.usfm | 2 +- 45-ACT/13.usfm | 2 +- 3 files changed, 30 insertions(+), 30 deletions(-) diff --git a/04-NUM/02.usfm b/04-NUM/02.usfm index bb928944..3783f5ca 100644 --- a/04-NUM/02.usfm +++ b/04-NUM/02.usfm @@ -4,38 +4,38 @@ \c 2 \p \v 1 Yahweh spoke again to Moses and Aaron. He said, -\v 2 "Every descendant of Israel must camp around the banner of his armed group belonging to the army, and around a smaller flag indicating his tribe. Their camps must face the tent of meeting. +\v 2 "Each one of the Israelites must camp around his standard, with the banners of their fathers' houses. They will camp around the tent of meeting on every side. \s5 -\v 3 The men who belong to the camp of Judah must camp with their armed groups around Judah's banner, to the east of the tent of meeting, the side where the sun rises. Nahshon son of Amminadab must lead the army of Judah. -\v 4 The army of Judah has 74,600 men. +\v 3 Those will be camping on the east of the tent of meeting, where the sun rises, they are the camp of Judah and they are camping under their standard. Nahshon son of Amminadab is the leader of the people of Judah. +\v 4 The number of the people of Judah is 74,600. \s5 \v 5 The tribe of Issachar must camp next to Judah. Nethanel son of Zuar must lead the army of Issachar. -\v 6 The army of Nethanel has 54,400 men. +\v 6 The number in his division is 54,400 men. \s5 \v 7 The tribe of Zebulun must camp next to Issachar. Eliab son of Helon must lead the army of Zebulun. -\v 8 The army of Zebulun has 57,400 men. +\v 8 The number in his division is 57,400. \s5 -\v 9 All the armies that camp together with Judah number 186,400 men. They must go out from the camp first. +\v 9 All the number of the camp of Judah is 186,400. They will set out first. \s5 \p -\v 10 The armies on the south side must camp around the banner of Reuben. Elizur son of Shedeur must lead the army of Reuben. -\v 11 The army of Reuben has 46,500 men. +\v 10 On the south side will be the camp of Reuben under their standard. The leader of the camp of Ruben is Elizur son of Shedeur. +\v 11 The number in his division is 46,500. \s5 -\v 12 The tribe of Simeon must camp next to Reuben. Shelumiel son of Zurishaddai must lead the army of Simeon. -\v 13 The army of Simeon has 59,300 men. +\v 12 Simeon is camping next to Reuben. The leader of the people of Simeon is Shelumiel son of Zurishaddai. +\v 13 Those numbered in his division is 59,300. \s5 -\v 14 The tribe of Gad is next. Eliasaph son of Deuel must lead the army of Gad. -\v 15 The army of Gad has 45,650 men. +\v 14 The tribe of Gad is next. The leader of the people of God is Eliasaph son of Deuel. +\v 15 The number in his division is 45,650. \s5 -\v 16 All the armies that must camp together with Reuben number 151,450 men. They must go out from the camp second. +\v 16 All those numbered in the camp of Reuben, according to their divisions, is 151,450. They will set out second. \s5 \p @@ -43,39 +43,39 @@ \s5 \p -\v 18 The army of Ephraim must camp on the west side of the tent of meeting. Elishama son of Ammihud must lead the army of Ephraim. -\v 19 The army of Ephraim has 40,500 men. +\v 18 The divisions of the camp of Ephraim under their standard. The leader of the people of Ephraim is Elishama son of Ammihud. +\v 19 The number in his division is 40,500. \s5 -\v 20 The tribe of Manasseh must camp next to Ephraim. Gamaliel son of Pedahzur must lead the army of Manasseh. -\v 21 The army of Manasseh has 32,200 men. +\v 20 Next to them is the tribe of Manasseh. The leader of Manasseh is Gamaliel son of Pedahzur. +\v 21 The number in his division is 32,200. \s5 -\v 22 The tribe of Benjamin is next. Abidan son of Gideoni must lead the army of Benjamin. -\v 23 The army of Manasseh has 35,400 men. +\v 22 Next will be the tribe of Benjamin. The leader of Benjamin is Abidan son of Gideoni. +\v 23 The number in his division is 35,400. \s5 -\v 24 All the armies that camp together with Ephraim number 108,100 men. They must go out from the camp third. +\v 24 All those numbered in the camp of Ephraim is 108,100. They will set out third. \s5 \p -\v 25 The army of Dan must camp around its banner on the north side of the tabernacle. Ahiezer son of Ammishaddai must lead the descendants of Dan. -\v 26 The army of Dan has 62,700 men. +\v 25 On the north will be the divisions of the camp of Dan. The leader of the people of Dan is Ahiezer son of Ammishaddai. +\v 26 The number in his division is 62,700. \s5 -\v 27 The people of the tribe of Asher must camp next to Dan. Pagiel son of Ochran must lead the descendants of Asher. -\v 28 The army of Asher has 41,500 men. +\v 27 The people of the tribe of Asher camp next to Dan. The leader of Asher is Pagiel son of Ochran. +\v 28 The number in his division is 41,500. \s5 -\v 29 The tribe of Naphtali is next. Ahira son of Enan must lead the descendants of Naphtali. -\v 30 The army of Naphtali has 53,400 men. +\v 29 The tribe of Naphtali is next. The leader of Naphthali is Ahira son of Enan. +\v 30 The mnumber in his division is 53,400. \s5 -\v 31 All the armies that camp together with Dan number 157,600 men. They must go out from the camp last with their banner." +\v 31 All those numbered in the camp with Dan is 157,600. They will go out from the camp last, under their banner." \s5 \p -\v 32 Moses and Aaron counted by their ancestor's clans 603,550 men in the armies of the people of Israel. +\v 32 These are the Israelites, numbered according to their families. All those counted in their camps, by their divisions, are 603,550. \v 33 But Moses and Aaron did not count the Levites among the people of Israel. This was as Yahweh had commanded Moses. \s5 diff --git a/04-NUM/03.usfm b/04-NUM/03.usfm index c22a3ace..afaae054 100644 --- a/04-NUM/03.usfm +++ b/04-NUM/03.usfm @@ -33,7 +33,7 @@ \p \v 14 Yahweh spoke to Moses in the wilderness of Sinai. He said, \v 15 "Count the descendants of Levi in each family, in their ancestor's houses. Count every male who is one month old and older." -\v 16 Moses counted them, following the directions given to them by Yahweh's word, as Yahweh commanded. +\v 16 Moses counted them, following the word of Yahweh, just as he was commanded to do. \s5 \v 17 The names of Levi's sons were Gershon, Kohath, and Merari. diff --git a/45-ACT/13.usfm b/45-ACT/13.usfm index 25a4b600..dfeb9a6a 100644 --- a/45-ACT/13.usfm +++ b/45-ACT/13.usfm @@ -16,7 +16,7 @@ \v 8 But Elymas "the magician" (that is how his name is translated) opposed them; he tried to turn the proconsul away from the faith. \s5 -\v 9 But Saul, who is also called Paul, was filled with the Holy Spirit; he gazed at him +\v 9 But Saul, who is also called Paul, filled with the Holy Spirit, stared at him intensely. \v 10 and said, "You son of the devil, you are full of all kinds of deceit and wickedness. You are an enemy of every kind of righteousness. You will never stop twisting the straight paths of the Lord, will you? \s5