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 \v 1 This saying is trustworthy: If someone desires to be an overseer, he desires a good work.
-\v 2 Therefore the overseer must be without reproach, a husband of one wife, moderate, sensible, orderly, hospitable, able to teach.
-\v 3 He must not be addicted to wine, not a brawler, but instead, gentle, peaceful, not a lover of money.
+\v 2 Therefore the overseer must be without reproach. He must be a husband of one wife. He must be moderate, sensible, orderly, hospitable. He must be able to teach.
+\v 3 He must not be addicted to wine, not a brawler, but instead, gentle, peaceful. He must not be a lover of money.
 
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 \v 4 He should manage his own household well, and his children should obey him with all respect.
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 \v 7 He must also have a good reputation with those outside, so that he does not fall into disgrace and the trap of the devil.
 
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-\v 8 Deacons, likewise, should be dignified, not double-talkers, not drinking too much wine, and not greedy.
+\v 8 Deacons, likewise, should be dignified, not double-talkers. They should not drink too much wine or be greedy.
 \v 9 They should keep the revealed truth of the faith with a clean conscience.
 \v 10 They should also be approved first, then they should serve because they are above reproach.
 
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-\v 11 Women in the same way should be dignified, not slanderers, moderate, and faithful in all things.
-\v 12 Deacons must be husbands of one wife and manage well their children and household.
+\v 11 Women in the same way should be dignified. They should not be slanderers. They should be moderate and faithful in all things.
+\v 12 Deacons must be husbands of one wife. They must manage well their children and household.
 \v 13 For those who have served well acquire for themselves a good standing and great confidence in the faith that is in Christ Jesus.
 
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