LEV 11:7 The pig ... is unclean to you #1060

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opened 2022-01-12 20:49:31 +00:00 by bobj · 1 comment

bobj commented

2022-01-12 20:49:31 +00:00

\v 7 The pig, although it has a split hoof, does not chew the cud, is unclean to you.

ISSUE: Garbled sentence construction as written.

SUGGESTION:

\v 7 The pig is unclean to you because although it has a split hoof, it does not chew the cud.

\v 7 The pig, although it has a split hoof, does not chew the cud, is unclean to you. ISSUE: Garbled sentence construction as written. SUGGESTION: \v 7 The pig is unclean to you because although it has a split hoof, it does not chew the cud.

SusanQuigley commented

2022-02-16 19:30:14 +00:00

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I think the ULB needs to be fixed, and Bob's suggestion is very clear, but it might be good to use a structure similar to what's in the previous verses.

Current ULB
\v 4 However, some animals either chew the cud or have a split hoof, and you must not eat them, animals such as the camel, because it chews the cud but does not have a split hoof. So the camel is unclean to you.

\s5
\v 5 Also the rock badger, because it chews the cud but does not have a split hoof, it is also unclean to you.
\v 6 The rabbit, because it chews the cud, but does not have a split hoof, is unclean to you.
\v 7 The pig, although it has a split hoof, does not chew the cud, is unclean to you.

Wow, there's some variety in the translation of those verses.

Suggstion A: The x, because it does this but not that, is unclean to you.
\v 4 However, some animals either chew the cud or have a split hoof, and you must not eat them, animals such as the camel. Because it chews the cud but does not have a split hoof, it is unclean to you.

\s5
\v 5 Also the rock badger, because it chews the cud but does not have a split hoof, is also unclean to you.
\v 6 The rabbit, because it chews the cud but does not have a split hoof, is unclean to you.
\v 7 The pig, because it has a split hoof but does not chew the cud, is unclean to you.

Suggestion B: The x--although it does this, it does not do that, so it is unclean to you.
\v 4 However, some animals either chew the cud or have a split hoof, and you must not eat them, animals such as the camel. Although it chews the cud, it does not have a split hoof, so it is unclean to you.

\s5
\v 5 Also the rock badger--although it chews the cud, it does not have a split hoof, so it is also unclean to you.
\v 6 The rabbit--although it chews the cud, it does not have a split hoof, so it is unclean to you.
\v 7 The pig--although it has a split hoof, it does not chew the cud, so it is unclean to you.

Check TNs for 11:4.

I think the ULB needs to be fixed, and Bob's suggestion is very clear, but it might be good to use a structure similar to what's in the previous verses. **Current ULB** \v 4 However, some animals either chew the cud or have a split hoof, and you must not eat them, animals such as the camel, because it chews the cud but does not have a split hoof. So the camel is unclean to you. \s5 \v 5 Also the rock badger, because it chews the cud but does not have a split hoof, it is also unclean to you. \v 6 The rabbit, because it chews the cud, but does not have a split hoof, is unclean to you. \v 7 The pig, although it has a split hoof, does not chew the cud, is unclean to you. **Wow, there's some variety in the translation of those verses.** **Suggstion A: The x, because it does this but not that, is unclean to you.** \v 4 However, some animals either chew the cud or have a split hoof, and you must not eat them, animals such as the camel. Because it chews the cud but does not have a split hoof, it is unclean to you. \s5 \v 5 Also the rock badger, because it chews the cud but does not have a split hoof, is also unclean to you. \v 6 The rabbit, because it chews the cud but does not have a split hoof, is unclean to you. \v 7 The pig, because it has a split hoof but does not chew the cud, is unclean to you. **Suggestion B: The x--although it does this, it does not do that, so it is unclean to you.** \v 4 However, some animals either chew the cud or have a split hoof, and you must not eat them, animals such as the camel. Although it chews the cud, it does not have a split hoof, so it is unclean to you. \s5 \v 5 Also the rock badger--although it chews the cud, it does not have a split hoof, so it is also unclean to you. \v 6 The rabbit--although it chews the cud, it does not have a split hoof, so it is unclean to you. \v 7 The pig--although it has a split hoof, it does not chew the cud, so it is unclean to you. **Check TNs for 11:4.**