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-\v 1 Do not scold an older man, but exhort him as if he were a father, and exhort younger men as if they were brothers.
+\v 1 Do not scold an older man. Instead, exhort him as if he were a father. Exhort younger men as if they were brothers.
 \v 2 Exhort older women as mothers, and younger women as sisters in all purity.
 
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-\v 3 Honor widows, the real widows; 
-\v 4 but if a widow has children or grandchildren, let them first learn to show honor in their own household and repay their parents, because this is pleasing to God.
+\v 3 Honor widows, the real widows. 
+\v 4 But if a widow has children or grandchildren, let them first learn to show honor in their own household. Let them repay their parents, because this is pleasing to God.
 
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-\v 5 But a real widow is left all alone and puts her confidence in God, she always waits before him with requests and prayers both night and day.
+\v 5 But a real widow is left all alone. She puts her confidence in God. She always waits before him with requests and prayers both night and day.
 \v 6 However, the woman who lives for pleasure is dead, even though she is still alive.
 
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-\v 7  And preach these things so that they may be beyond reproach.
+\v 7 And preach these things so that the people may be beyond reproach.
 \v 8 But if someone does not provide for his own relatives, especially for those of his own household, he has denied the faith and is worse than an unbeliever.
 
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-\v 9 Let a widow be enrolled as a widow who is not younger in years than sixty, a wife of one husband.
-\v 10 She must be known for good deeds, whether it is that she has cared for children, or has been  hospitable to strangers, or has washed the feet of the believers, or has relieved the afflicted, or has followed every good work.
+\v 9 Let a woman be enrolled as a widow who is not younger than sixty, a wife of one husband.
+\v 10 She must be known for good deeds, whether it is that she has cared for children, or has been hospitable to strangers, or has washed the feet of the believers, or has relieved the afflicted, or has been devoted to every good work.
 
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-\v 11 But as for younger widows, refuse to enroll them in the list, because when they are overcome by bodily desires against Christ, they want to marry.
-\v 12 In this way they incur guilt because they revoke their prior commitment.
-\v 13 Also, they become accustomed to being idle, going around from house to house. Not only do they become idle, but they also become gossips and meddlesome, saying things they should not say.
+\v 11 But as for younger widows, refuse to enroll them in the list. For when they are overcome by bodily desires against Christ, they want to marry.
+\v 12 In this way they incur guilt because they revoke their first commitment.
+\v 13 They also become accustomed to being idle. They go around from house to house. Not only do they become idle, but they also become gossips and meddlesome. They say things they should not say.
 
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-\v 14 I therefore want younger women to marry, to bear children, to manage the house, to give the adversary no opportunity to accuse us of doing evil.
+\v 14 I therefore want younger women to marry, to bear children, to manage the house, in order to give the adversary no opportunity to accuse us of doing evil.
 \v 15 For some have already turned aside after Satan.
-\v 16 If any believing  woman has widows, let her help them, so that the church be not burdened, so that it might help the real widows.
+\v 16 If any believing woman has widows, let her help them, so that the church will not be weighed down, so that it might help the real widows.
 
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 \v 19 Do not receive an accusation against an elder unless there are two or three witnesses.
-\v 20 Reprove sinners in the sight of all so that the rest may be afraid.
+\v 20 Correct sinners in the sight of all so that the rest may be afraid.
 
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 \v 21 I solemnly command you in the sight of God, of Christ Jesus, and of the chosen angels, that you keep these rules without bias, and that you do nothing out of favoritism.
-\v 22 Place hands hastily upon no one, neither share in the sins belonging to another person. You should keep yourself pure.
+\v 22 Place hands hastily on no one. Do not share in the sins that belong to another person. You should keep yourself pure.
 
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-\v 23 You should no longer drink water, but rather you should take a little wine for the stomach and your frequent sicknesses.
-\v 24 The sins of some people are openly known, and they go before them into judgment. But some follow later.
+\v 23 You should no longer drink water. Instead, you should take a little wine for the stomach and your frequent sicknesses.
+\v 24 The sins of some people are openly known, and they go before them into judgment. But some sins follow later.
 \v 25 Likewise, some good works are openly known, but even the others cannot be hidden.
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