From cba5050130d442cbf51088bdaeca8bf0b2a1cd11 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Hanker10 Date: Tue, 12 Apr 2016 19:14:45 -0400 Subject: [PATCH] Acts 11:5 & 6 simplify grammar and add period Acts 11:5 Original: four corners; it descended to me Change: four corners. It descended to me. I'm following the suggested rewording by Suze Lau, one of the readers for the text team. I also changed the semi-colon to a period in verse 5 and then also in verse 6 and made these clauses independent sentences to simplify the grammar. --- 45-ACT/11.usfm | 4 ++-- 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-) diff --git a/45-ACT/11.usfm b/45-ACT/11.usfm index fd76b9dd..1d78ed84 100644 --- a/45-ACT/11.usfm +++ b/45-ACT/11.usfm @@ -9,8 +9,8 @@ \s5 \v 4 But Peter started to explain the matter to them in detail; he said, -\v 5 I was praying in the city of Joppa, and in a trance I saw a vision of a container coming down, like a large sheet let down from heaven by its four corners; it descended to me -\v 6 I gazed at it and I thought about it; I saw the four-legged animals of earth, wild beasts, creeping animals, and birds of the sky. +\v 5 I was praying in the city of Joppa, and in a trance I saw a vision of a container coming down, like a large sheet let down from heaven by its four corners. It descended to me. +\v 6 I gazed at it and I thought about it. I saw the four-legged animals of earth, wild beasts, creeping animals, and birds of the sky. \s5 \v 7 Then I heard a voice say to me, "Get up, Peter; kill and eat!"