From PDF Ecclesiastes 10-12

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 \q2 a kind of error that comes from a ruler:
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 \v 6 Fools are given leadership positions,
-\q2 while successful men are given low positions.
+\q2 while wealthy men are given low positions.
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 \v 7 I have seen slaves riding horses,
-\q2 and successful men walking like slaves on the ground.
+\q2 and princes walking like slaves on the ground.
 
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 \q2 and it is a pleasant thing for the eyes to see the sun.
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 \v 8 If someone lives many years,
-\q2 let him be happy in all of them,
+\q2 let him rejoice in all of them,
 \q1 but let him think about the coming days of darkness,
 \q2 for they will be many.
 \q1 Everything to come is meaningless.
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 \v 3 That will be the time when the palace guards will tremble,
 \q2 and strong men are bent over,
 \q1 and the women who grind cease because they are few,
-\q1 and those who look out of windows no longer see clearly.
+\q1 and those who look through windows become dim.
 
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 \v 5 That will be the time when men become afraid of heights
-\q2 and of dangers along on the road,
+\q2 and of terrors along the road,
 \q1 and when the almond tree blossoms,
 \q2 and when grasshoppers drag themselves along,
 \q2 and when natural desires fail.