From 19331bb80548fe6c36da26160aeb4d1cba195884 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Tom Warren Date: Mon, 5 Jun 2017 10:12:36 -0400 Subject: [PATCH] From Forest Dean via Larry Sallee --- 67-REV/01.usfm | 6 +++--- 67-REV/03.usfm | 4 ++-- 67-REV/04.usfm | 6 +++--- 67-REV/05.usfm | 6 ++---- 4 files changed, 10 insertions(+), 12 deletions(-) diff --git a/67-REV/01.usfm b/67-REV/01.usfm index 8dfa642b..f80c58ef 100644 --- a/67-REV/01.usfm +++ b/67-REV/01.usfm @@ -4,7 +4,7 @@ \p \v 1 This is the revelation of Jesus Christ that God gave him to show his servants what must soon take place. He made it known by sending his angel to his servant John. \v 2 John testified about the word of God and about the testimony given about Jesus Christ, all the things that he saw. -\v 3 Blessed are the one who reads aloud, and who listen to the words of this prophecy, and who obey what is written in it, because the time is near. +\v 3 Blessed is the one who reads aloud this prophecy, and those who listen to the words of this prophecy and who obey what is written in it, because the time is near. \s5 \p @@ -32,10 +32,10 @@ Yes, Amen. \s5 \v 12 I turned around to see whose voice was speaking to me, and as I turned I saw seven golden lampstands. -\v 13 In the middle of the lampstands there was one like a son of man, wearing a long robe that reached down to his feet, and a golden sash around his chest. +\v 13 In the middle of the lampstands there was one like a son of man, wearing a long robe that reached down to his feet and a golden sash around his chest. \s5 -\v 14 His head and hair were as white as wool—as white as snow, and his eyes were like a flame of fire. +\v 14 His head and hair were as white as wool—as white as snow—and his eyes were like a flame of fire. \v 15 His feet were like polished bronze, like bronze that had been refined in a furnace, and his voice was like the sound of many rushing waters. \v 16 He had seven stars in his right hand, and a sword with two sharp edges was coming out of his mouth. His face was shining like the sun at its strongest. diff --git a/67-REV/03.usfm b/67-REV/03.usfm index 6ff931ee..f3fdfd27 100644 --- a/67-REV/03.usfm +++ b/67-REV/03.usfm @@ -26,12 +26,12 @@ \v 8 "I know what you have done. Look, I have put before you an open door that no one can shut. I know that you have little strength, yet you have obeyed my word and have not denied my name. \s5 -\v 9 Look! Those who belong to the synagogue of Satan, those who say they are Jews but are not; they are lying instead. I will make them come and bow down before your feet, and they will come to know that I loved you. +\v 9 Look! Those who belong to the synagogue of Satan who say they are Jews but are not, but they are liars—I will make them come and bow down before your feet, and they will come to know that I loved you. \v 10 Since you have kept my command to endure patiently, I will also keep you from the hour of testing that is coming on the whole world, to test those who live on the earth. \v 11 I am coming soon. Hold tight to what you have so no one can take away your crown. \s5 -\v 12 I will make the one who conquers a pillar in the temple of my God, and he will never go out of it. I will write on him the name of my God, the name of the city of my God (the new Jerusalem, that comes down out of heaven from my God), and my new name. +\v 12 The one who conquers, I will make like a pillar in the temple of my God. Never again will he go out of it, and I will write on him the name of my God, the name of the city of my God (the new Jerusalem, that comes down out of heaven from my God), and my new name. \v 13 Let the one who has an ear listen to what the Spirit is saying to the churches."'" \s5 diff --git a/67-REV/04.usfm b/67-REV/04.usfm index fed696d0..1233f927 100644 --- a/67-REV/04.usfm +++ b/67-REV/04.usfm @@ -26,6 +26,6 @@ \v 10 the twenty-four elders prostrated themselves before the one seated on the throne. They bowed down to the one living forever and ever, and they threw down their crowns before the throne, saying, \q \v 11 "Worthy are you, our Lord and our God, -\q2 to receive the glory and the honor and the power. -\q For you created all things, -\q2 and by your will, they existed and were created." +\q2 to receive glory and honor and power, +\q for you created all things, +\q2 and by your will they existed and were created." diff --git a/67-REV/05.usfm b/67-REV/05.usfm index d11cedc5..ab6fadec 100644 --- a/67-REV/05.usfm +++ b/67-REV/05.usfm @@ -1,11 +1,9 @@ - - \s5 \c 5 \p -\v 1 Then I saw in the right hand of the one who was seated on the throne, a scroll written on the front side and the back side. It had been sealed with seven seals. -\v 2 I saw a powerful angel proclaiming with a loud voice, "Who is worthy to open the scroll and break its seals?" +\v 1 Then I saw in the right hand of the one who was seated on the throne a scroll written on the front and on the back, sealed with seven seals. +\v 2 I saw a mighty angel proclaiming with a loud voice, "Who is worthy to open the scroll and break its seals?" \s5 \v 3 No one in heaven or on the earth or under the earth was able to open the scroll or to read it.