Tom Warren
9de02e3807
temple
2016-07-13 18:19:37 -04:00
Hanker10
c8e285a139
1 Cor 10:4 change wording
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1 Cor 10:4 change wording - same as in previous verse
2016-07-13 18:13:27 -04:00
Hanker10
29a404cb0b
1 Cor 10:3 change wording
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1 Cor 10:3 change wording by adding "supernatural" to "manna."
2016-07-13 18:12:22 -04:00
Hanker10
d173bac757
1 Cor 9:22 change wording for clarity
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1 Cor 9:22 change wording for clarity
2016-07-13 16:48:30 -04:00
Hanker10
361812bea1
1 Cor 9:19 change wording for clarity
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1 Cor 9:19 change wording for clarity
2016-07-13 16:44:47 -04:00
Hanker10
ca45c969d5
1 Cor 9:16 change wording for clarity
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1 Cor 9:16 change wording for clarity
2016-07-13 16:41:59 -04:00
Hanker10
d2ceca9836
1 Cor 9:15 change wording for clarity
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1 Cor 9:15 change wording "money" to "any of these things" because the rights Paul could have claimed go beyond the monetary and other changes for clarity
2016-07-13 16:40:23 -04:00
Hanker10
83ddca4b73
1 Cor 9:10 cut extra wording
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1 Cor 9:10 cut extra wording at the end, ", just like an an apostle over his church" since this is not at all in the text. Besides, it gives the idea that apostles have churches like pastors, but apostles are sent out, pastors stay.
2016-07-13 16:32:36 -04:00
Hanker10
4d1454350f
1 Cor 9:9 add missing word
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1 Cor 9:9 add missing word
2016-07-13 16:30:08 -04:00
Hanker10
463f4fcf0a
1 Cor 9:5 change wording
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1 Cor 9:5 change wording to include missing ideas from the original
2016-07-13 16:24:24 -04:00
Hanker10
58cd312c16
1 Cor 9:3 change wording
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1 Cor 9:3 change wording for clarity
2016-07-13 16:23:00 -04:00
Hanker10
410f926034
1 Cor 8:2 improve wording
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1 Cor 8:2 improve wording
2016-07-13 13:38:11 -04:00
Hanker10
d86ec39351
1 Cor 7:36 improve wording
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1 Cor 7:36 improve wording
2016-07-13 13:32:22 -04:00
Hanker10
d93ff11a0b
1 Cor 7:35 improve wording
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1 Cor 7:35 improve wording
2016-07-13 13:31:11 -04:00
Hanker10
412b480445
1 Cor 7:34 change wording
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1 Cor 7:34 change wording to keep the ideas closer to the original
2016-07-13 13:28:47 -04:00
Hanker10
053c7eb3a8
1 Cor 7:34 change "girls" to "young ladies"
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1 Cor 7:34 change "girls" to "young ladies"
2016-07-13 13:24:49 -04:00
Hanker10
44a4ca5dd5
1 Cor 7:33 change "day to day" to "ordinary"
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1 Cor 7:33 change "day to day" to "ordinary"
2016-07-13 13:22:07 -04:00
Hanker10
7764530cfb
1 Cor 7:30 change "shed a tear"
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1 Cor 7:30 change "shed a tear" to what you see because it is an idiom that could be unfamiliar to many. Also, dropped "or in their hearts" after "joy on their faces" because this is added. Also, "they wanted" after "to buy something." These are all additions that qualify the ideas too far.
2016-07-13 13:18:23 -04:00
Hanker10
9ce09929d4
1 Cor 7:21 change word "buy" to "gain"
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1 Cor 7:21 change word "buy" to "gain" since not all slaves had to purchase their freedom and this idea is not in the original
2016-07-13 12:55:30 -04:00
Hanker10
107391498f
1 Cor 7:11 drop last sentence
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1 Cor 7:11 drop last sentence, "These are the commands of the Lord." since this is not in the original and is repeated from verse 10 unnecessarily.
2016-07-13 12:43:08 -04:00
Hanker10
df0db16a31
1 Cor 7:6 change wording
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1 Cor 7:6 change wording to include the concept of concession (as in ULB)
2016-07-13 12:39:21 -04:00
Tom Warren
9c498b3e5a
punctuation
2016-07-13 12:01:43 -04:00
Tom Warren
958aaf2891
twelve
2016-07-13 11:38:06 -04:00
Tom Warren
04f1115835
Twelve to LC twelve
2016-07-13 11:16:28 -04:00
Tom Warren
e31afee8df
Twelve
2016-07-13 11:01:12 -04:00
pohlig
e574daad45
Update 01.usfm
2016-07-13 10:58:22 -04:00
Tom Warren
f1f53ba0f8
Clarity
2016-07-13 10:38:28 -04:00
Hanker10
228ebbefa9
1 Cor 6:13 change wording
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1 Cor 6:13 change wording: "person" is too broad a term to represent "stomach."
2016-07-13 10:32:16 -04:00
Hanker10
b81aff5ce9
1 Cor 6:12 correct faulty wording
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1 Cor 6:12 correct faulty wording
2016-07-13 10:23:42 -04:00
Hanker10
e248c2a714
1 Cor 6:10 change wording about the kingdom
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1 Cor 6:10 change wording about the kingdom
2016-07-13 10:20:58 -04:00
Hanker10
4ffcbb6348
1 Cor 6:9 change wording about the kingdom
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1 Cor 6:9 change wording about the kingdom
2016-07-13 10:17:12 -04:00
Hanker10
0f17ab3cf8
1 Cor 6:5 change wording
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1 Cor 6:5 change wording to include the idea of shaming
2016-07-13 10:08:42 -04:00
Tom Warren
7859fe9e9a
james Royal law
2016-07-13 10:07:01 -04:00
Hanker10
7d2631d626
1 Cor 6:1 change wording
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1 Cor 6:1 change wording to include the idea of "daring to" since their practice violated the sanctity of the body of believers
2016-07-13 10:00:34 -04:00
Tom Warren
64ae12ba7f
not too many plagues
2016-07-13 09:33:40 -04:00
Henry Whitney
1f33510e85
extra empty paras
2016-07-13 09:30:12 -04:00
Tom Warren
6a1b215cdf
wine for wrath
2016-07-13 09:22:37 -04:00
Tom Warren
31c2441998
Therefor into therefore
2016-07-13 09:22:37 -04:00
pohlig
908361235c
Update 12.usfm
2016-07-13 08:42:03 -04:00
Tom Warren
0310fec863
consistency turned into blood
2016-07-13 08:40:07 -04:00
Tom Warren
2714546258
what was contained in his bowl
2016-07-13 08:38:18 -04:00
Tom Warren
ce80603a29
Reworked
2016-07-13 08:34:20 -04:00
Tom Warren
3f62bc06b6
seeking clarity
2016-07-13 08:28:21 -04:00
Tom Warren
0d2a4d8b0f
Comma removed
2016-07-13 08:15:52 -04:00
Hanker10
fb678a8761
1 Cor 5:10 change words for clarity
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1 Cor 5:10 change words for clarity
2016-07-12 21:33:58 -04:00
Hanker10
9b04192d61
1 Cor 5:9 change word for clarity
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1 Cor 5:9 change word for clarity: "be with" becomes "keep company with"
2016-07-12 21:28:43 -04:00
Hanker10
3131be8755
1 Cor 5:7 change word for clarity
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1 Cor 5:7 change word for clarity: "affect" becomes "infect"
2016-07-12 21:26:55 -04:00
Hanker10
0fe2f94a5c
1 Cor 5:5 add 2 phrases for clarity
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1 Cor 5:5 add 2 phrases for clarity
2016-07-12 21:24:58 -04:00
Hanker10
0d7361ece1
1 Cor 4:21 change one word
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1 Cor 4:21 change one word: "rod" so that the meaning comes out better
2016-07-12 17:22:42 -04:00
Hanker10
88001c8b9a
1 Cor 4:7 correct wrong noun number
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1 Cor 4:7 correct wrong noun number
2016-07-12 17:17:17 -04:00