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32 Commits

Author SHA1 Message Date
hharrissWA 1f9a3d1210 Update 04.usfm
reversed previous change:
"who meets"
changed back to
"that meets"
(because it is "the group ... that meets")
2016-07-08 08:07:25 -05:00
hharrissWA 9838b750b5 Update 04.usfm
"that meets"
changed to:
"who meet"
2016-07-08 08:03:36 -05:00
Henry Whitney febc048de0 corrected misspelling 2016-07-08 07:45:29 -04:00
hharrissWA ba35245061 Update 02.usfm
"But he is like... "
changed to:
"He is like..."

"But" is not there and is not needed, and in fact seems to confuse.
2016-07-08 06:22:52 -05:00
Henry Whitney 45cd299dfa 3:19 "who" for "that" relative pronoun 2016-07-07 16:49:58 -04:00
pohlig 12111e7b97 Update 02.usfm 2016-07-07 11:37:29 -04:00
hharrissWA 2f34d372b2 Update 01.usfm
"We pray that you will do every good thing that he tells you to do."
changed to:
"We pray that grow to understand God more and do every good thing that he tells you to do."

The phrase "grow in the knowledge of God" was not translated here in the UDB.
2016-07-07 09:14:07 -05:00
hharrissWA 9d00926ed0 Update 01.usfm
"live in a way that others will honor the Lord for"
changed to:
"live in a way that will help others honor the Lord also"
2016-07-07 09:06:21 -05:00
hharrissWA a6947973ae Update 01.usfm
v. 6: "... will give much a very large harvest." 
changed to:
"will give a very large harvest."
2016-07-07 08:24:59 -05:00
pohlig 3af457ab8a Update 03.usfm 2016-07-07 09:20:54 -04:00
Henry Whitney 1bc978f45b Col 3:6 wrath is more than anger 2016-07-06 15:04:55 -04:00
Henry Whitney 45cc2ae3a5 Col 3:5
It is the desire that needs to be killed, as it is innate to the
person, not the things one desires to do, which are exterior.
2016-07-06 15:02:18 -04:00
Henry Whitney ac1f6add31 zapped extraneous spaces 2016-07-06 14:40:05 -04:00
Henry Whitney 2a8dd5c6ac explicating ULB in UDB 2016-07-06 13:11:21 -04:00
Henry Whitney 3cbde184a6 smoothed punctuation 2016-07-06 13:04:48 -04:00
Henry Whitney 243fbcac42 swapped in more commonly used synonym 2016-07-06 12:37:07 -04:00
Henry Whitney 04e047a9dc Changed reflexive to emphatic 2016-07-06 10:14:15 -04:00
Henry Whitney c8ef76b52a zapped dittography 2016-07-06 09:40:10 -04:00
Henry Whitney 114e655d9e church is lowercase 2016-07-05 15:36:15 -04:00
Henry Whitney 4be16122a3 typo 2016-07-05 15:21:14 -04:00
Henry Whitney cb4f7575ce what Epaphras taught was the good news, not that something else would happen 2016-07-05 15:11:53 -04:00
Henry Whitney 5e7a5df4c9 specifying object of God's will 2016-07-05 13:59:17 -04:00
Henry Whitney fe683c0c01 fixed wrong uppercase 2016-07-05 13:57:25 -04:00
Henry Whitney ad031fe637 zapped extraneous comma 2016-07-05 13:20:53 -04:00
Henry Whitney 43e7a79085 zapped stray empty lines 2016-07-05 11:19:52 -04:00
Tom Warren 07c439aeea Greeting consistency 2016-05-25 11:11:55 -04:00
pohlig b7e73ce179 Update 04.usfm 2016-05-19 18:47:38 -04:00
pohlig 5d82e6a4ad Update 03.usfm 2016-05-19 14:34:05 -04:00
pohlig 7fcb709cd4 Update 01.usfm 2016-05-17 21:27:41 -04:00
Henry Whitney ba37d92974 Col 4
Towards to towards
Delete empty paras
2016-05-02 10:58:52 +05:45
Apache Production e3fd5a5d05 Added README.md for each book with links to door43.org 2016-04-05 15:56:40 +00:00
Richard Mahn 78b7b614f7 Initial commit from Etherpad 2016-04-01 21:07:40 +00:00