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-\v 1 One day the people complained to Yahweh about their troubles. When Yahweh heard what they were saying, he became angry. So he sent a fire which burned among the people at the edge of their camp.
+\v 1 One day the people complained to Yahweh about their troubles. When Yahweh heard what they were saying, he became angry. So he sent a fire that burned among the people at the edge of their camp.
 \v 2 Then the people cried out to Moses, and he prayed to Yahweh. Then the fire stopped burning.
 \v 3 So they called that place Taberah, which means 'Burning,' because the fire from Yahweh had burned among them.
 
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-\v 4 Then some troublemakers from other peoples who were traveling with the Israelites began to want better food. And when they started complaining the Israelite people also started to complain. They said, "We wish we had some meat to eat!
+\v 4 Then some troublemakers from other peoples who were traveling with the Israelites began to want better food. And when they started complaining, the Israelite people also started to complain. They said, "We wish we had some meat to eat!
 \v 5 We remember the fish that we ate while we were in Egypt, fish that was given to us without cost. And we had all the cucumbers, melons, leeks, onions, and garlic we could eat.
 \v 6 But now we have lost our appetite, because all we have to eat is this manna!"
 
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 \v 31 But the men who had gone with him said, "No, we cannot attack and defeat those people. They are much stronger than we are!"
 
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-\v 32 So those men gave to the Israelite people a bad report about the land that they had explored. They said, "The land that we explored destroys the life those who try to attack it. And all the people living there are very tall.
-\v 33 We also saw giants there. They are the descendants of Anak (who come from the Nephilim, those giant people). When we saw these giants we felt as small as grasshoppers and they thought that we looked like grasshoppers too."
+\v 32 So those men gave to the Israelite people a bad report about the land that they had explored. They said, "The land that we explored destroys the life of those who try to attack it. And all the people living there are very tall.
+\v 33 We also saw giants there. They are the descendants of Anak (who come from the Nephilim, those giant people). When we saw these giants, we felt as small as grasshoppers and they thought that we looked like grasshoppers too."
 
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 \v 1 That night, all the Israelite people cried loudly.
 \v 2 The next day they all complained against Aaron and Moses. All the men said, "We wish that we had died in Egypt, or in this wilderness!
-\v 3 Why is Yahweh bringing us to this land, where we men will be killed with swords? And they will take away our wives and children to be their slaves. Instead of going to Canaan, it would be better for us to return to Egypt!"
+\v 3 Why is Yahweh bringing us to this land, where we will be killed with swords? And they will take away our wives and children to be their slaves. Instead of going to Canaan, it would be better for us to return to Egypt!"
 
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 \v 4 Then some of them said to each other, "We should choose a leader who will take us back to Egypt!"
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 \v 34 You will suffer for your sins for forty years. That will be one year for each of the forty days that the twelve men explored the land of Canaan. And I will be like an enemy to you.
-\v 35 This will certainly happen because I, Yahweh, have said it! I will do these things to every one in this group that has plotted against me. They will all die right here in this wilderness!'"
+\v 35 This will certainly happen because I, Yahweh, have said it! I will do these things to everyone in this group who has plotted against me. They will all die right here in this wilderness!'"
 
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 \v 1 Then Yahweh told Moses,
 \v 2 "Tell this to the Israelite people, 'When you arrive in the land that I am giving to you,
-\v 3 you must offer to me special sacrifices which will be pleasing to me when the priest burns them on the altar. Some of them may be offerings that will be completely burned on the altar. Some of them may be to indicate that you have made a solemn promise to me. Some of them may be offerings that you yourselves have decided to make. Some of them may be offerings at one of the festivals that you celebrate each year. These offerings may be taken from your herds of cattle or from your flocks of sheep and goats.
+\v 3 you must offer to me special sacrifices that will be pleasing to me when the priest burns them on the altar. Some of them may be offerings that will be completely burned on the altar. Some of them may be to indicate that you have made a solemn promise to me. Some of them may be offerings that you yourselves have decided to make. Some of them may be offerings at one of the festivals that you celebrate each year. These offerings may be taken from your herds of cattle or from your flocks of sheep and goats.
 
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 \v 4 When you give these offerings, you must also bring to me a flour offering of about two liters of good flour mixed with about a liter of olive oil.
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 \v 22 There may be times when you Israelites do not obey all these instructions that I have given to Moses to tell you, but not because you intended to disobey them.
 \v 23 There may be times when some of your descendants do not obey all these instructions that I have given to Moses to tell to you.
-\v 24 If you or they sin by forgetting to obey these instructions and none of the Israelite people realize that they were doing that, one young bull as an offering for all the people must be brought to the priest. That will be pleasing to me when it is burned on the altar. They must also bring to me a flour offering and an offering of wine, and a male goat, to be sacrificed to remove the guilt of their sin.
+\v 24 If you or they sin by forgetting to obey these instructions and none of the Israelite people realize that they were doing that, one young bull as an offering for all the people must be brought to the priest. That will be pleasing to me when it is burned on the altar. They must also bring to me a flour offering and an offering of wine, and a male goat to be sacrificed to remove the guilt of their sin.
 
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 \v 25 By offering these sacrifices, the priest will make atonement for all of you Israelite people. Then, as a result of their bringing to me an offering to be burned on the altar, you will be forgiven, because you sinned without realizing that you were sinning.