Ps 81-90 minor edits/corrections/consistency

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 \v 9 You must not have any idols of other gods among you;
 \q2 you must never bow to worship any of them!
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-\v 10 I am Yahweh, your God;
+\v 10 I am Yahweh your God;
 \q2 It was not any of those gods who brought you out of Egypt;
 \q1 I am the one who did it!
 \q2 So request what you want me to do for you, and I will do it.
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 \v 6 Your enemies are the people who live in the tents of Edom—
-\q2 the Ishmaelites, Moab and the Hagrites, they conspire together with
-\v 7 the people of Gebal, and the Ammonites, and the Amalekites,
-\q2 and the Philistines, and the people of the city of Tyre.
+\q2 the Ishmaelites, Moab and the Hagrites; they conspire together with
+\v 7 the people of Gebal, the Ammonites, the Amalekites,
+\q2 the Philistines, and the people of the city of Tyre.
 
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-\v 9 God, do to those people things as you did to the Midian people.
+\v 9 God, do to those people things as you did to the Midian people,
 \q2 as you did to Sisera and Jabin at the river Kishon.
 \q1
 \v 10 You destroyed them at the town of Endor,
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 \v 3 Even sparrows and swallows have built nests near your temple;
 \q2 they take care of their young babies near the altars where people offer sacrifices to you,
-\q2 Commander of the angel armies, my king and my God.
+\q2 commander of the angel armies, my king and my God.
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 \v 4 How fortunate are those who are always in your temple,
 \q2 constantly singing to praise you.
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 \v 5 How fortunate are those whom you make strong,
 \q1 those who desire very much to make the trip up to Mount Zion.
 \q1
-\v 6 While they travel through the dryValley of Tears,
+\v 6 While they travel through the dry Valley of Tears,
 \q1 you cause it to become a place where there are springs of water,
 \q2 where the rains in the autumn fill the valley with water, a blessing from you.
 
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 \v 3 Lord, act kindly toward me
 \q2 because I cry out to you all during each day.
 \q1
-\v 4 Lord, cause me to be glad,
+\v 4 Lord, cause me to be glad
 \q2 because I pray to you.
 
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-\v 5 Lord, you are good to us, and you forgive us;
+\v 5 Lord, you are good to us and you forgive us;
 \q1 you faithfully love very much all those who pray to you.
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 \v 6 Yahweh, listen to my prayer;
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-\v 4 And Yahweh said, "I will talk of Rahab and Babyon 
+\v 4 And Yahweh said, "I will talk of Rahab and Babylon 
 \q2 and the people there who know me.
 \q2 There are some who know me among the people of Egypt and Babylonia,
 \q2 and they live in the lands of Philistia and Tyre and Ethiopia,
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 \v 8 You have caused my friends to avoid me;
 \q2 I have become repulsive to them.
-\q1 It is as though I were in a prison and cannot escape.
+\q1 It is as though I am in a prison and cannot escape.
 
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 \q2 everything on the earth is yours because you created it all.
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 \v 12 You created everything from the north to the south.
-\q2 Mount Tabor and Mount Hermon joyfully praise you .
+\q2 Mount Tabor and Mount Hermon joyfully praise you.
 
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 \q2 because you act in our favor, we defeat our enemies.
 \q1
 \v 18 Yahweh, you gave us the one who protects us;
-\q2 you, the holy God whom we Israelites worship, he gave us our king.
+\q2 you, the holy God whom we Israelites worship, gave us our king.
 
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 \v 38 But Yahweh, now you have rejected him!
 \q2 You are very angry with the king whom you appointed.
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-\v 39 It seems that you have broken the agreement that you made with your servant, David;
+\v 39 It seems that you have broken the agreement that you made with your servant David;
 \q2 it seems as though you have thrown his crown into the dust.
 \q1
 \v 40 You have torn down the walls that protect his city
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 \v 5 You cause people to die suddenly;
-\q2 they live only a short time as a dream lasts only a short time.
+\q2 they live only a short time, as a dream lasts only a short time.
 \q2 They are like grass that grows up.
 \q1
 \v 6 In the morning the grass sprouts and grows well,