worked on diff pass with John Hutchins and Henry Whitney, applied by Tom W

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 \q2 Your long hair is shiny and black;
 \q2 it is as though I, your king, am captured by your tresses.
 \q1
-\v 6 You whom I love, you who have many charming features that attract me,
-\q2 you are very beautiful and pleasant.
+\v 6 My love, you are so beautiful and lovely 
+\q2 with all your delights.

 \s5
 \q1