Ch 1-3 and speaker identifiers edits/corrections

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\q1 \q1
\v 5 You women of Jerusalem, \v 5 You women of Jerusalem,
\q2 I am dark but beautiful; \q2 I am dark but beautiful;
\q1 my dark skin is like the tents in Kedar, \q1 my dark skin is like the tents in Kedar
\q2 or like the beautiful curtains in Solomon's palace. \q2 or like the beautiful curtains in Solomon's palace.
\q1 \q1
\v 6 But do not stare at me because the sun has made my skin dark. \v 6 But do not stare at me because the sun has made my skin dark.
\q1 my brothers were angry with me, \q1 My brothers were angry with me,
\q1 so they forced me to work out in the sunshine in the vineyards, \q1 so they forced me to work out in the sunshine in the vineyards,
\q2 so I was not able to take good care of my body. \q2 so I was not able to take good care of my body.
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\q1 \q1
\v 1 I am like an insignificant flower in the plains, \v 1 I am like an insignificant flower in the plains,
\q2 like an insignificant lily growing in a valley. \q2 like an insignificant lily growing in a valley.
\s2 The man speaking to her \s2 Her lover speaking to her
\q1 \q1
\v 2 Among all the other young women, \v 2 Among all the other young women,
\q2 you, the one whom I love, are like a lily growing among thorns! \q2 you, the one whom I love, are like a lily growing among thorns!
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\s2 The woman speaking to her lover \s2 The woman speaking to her lover
\q1 \q1
\v 5 Refresh me and strengthen me with your lovemaking. \v 5 Refresh me and strengthen me with your lovemaking.
\q2 It is like eating raisins and other fruit, \q2 It is like eating raisins and other fruit
\q2 because I want you to love me even more. \q2 because I want you to love me even more.
\s2 The woman speaking to herself \s2 The woman speaking to herself
\q1 \q1
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\q1 \q1
\v 9 like a deer or a gazelle. \v 9 like a deer or a gazelle.
\q2 Now he is standing outside the wall of our house, \q2 Now he is standing outside the wall of our house,
\q1 looking in the window, \q1 looking in the window
\q2 and peering through the lattice. \q2 and peering through the lattice.
\s5 \s5
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\q1 we hear the pigeons cooing. \q1 we hear the pigeons cooing.
\q1 \q1
\v 13 There are young figs on the fig trees, \v 13 There are young figs on the fig trees,
\q2 and there are blossoms on the grapevines \q2 and there are blossoms on the grapevines;
\q1 and their fragrance fills the air. \q1 their fragrance fills the air.
\q2 You whom I love, get up; \q2 You whom I love, get up;
\q2 my beautiful one, come with me! \q2 my beautiful one, come with me!
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\v 14 You are like a dove hiding in the rocky cliff. \v 14 You are like a dove hiding in the rocky cliff.
\q1 Show me your face, \q1 Show me your face,
\q2 and allow me to hear your voice, \q2 and allow me to hear your voice,
\q2 because your voice is sounds sweet, \q2 because your voice sounds sweet,
\q1 and your face is lovely." \q1 and your face is lovely."
\s5 \s5
\s2 The woman speaking to the man \s2 The woman speaking to her lover
\q1 \q1
\v 15 There are other men who ruin women as wild dogs ruin vineyards; \v 15 There are other men who ruin women as wild dogs ruin vineyards;
\q2 do not allow those men to attack me. \q2 do not allow those men to attack me.
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\q2 until we are ready to stop. \q2 until we are ready to stop.
\s5 \s5
\s2 The young woman speaking to herself \s2 The woman speaking to herself
\q1 \q1
\v 6 What is that I see coming from the wilderness, \v 6 What is that I see coming from the wilderness,
\q2 something that is stirring up dust like a column of smoke \q2 something that is stirring up dust like a column of smoke
\q1 like smoke from burning myrrh and incense \q1 like smoke from burning myrrh and incense
\q2 made from spices imported by merchants? \q2 made from spices imported by merchants?
\q1 \q1
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\v 11 You women of Jerusalem, \v 11 You women of Jerusalem,
\q2 come and look at King Solomon \q2 come and look at King Solomon
\q1 wearing the headdress that his mother put on his head \q1 wearing the headdress that his mother put on his head
\q2 on the day when he was married, \q2 on the day when he was married
\q1 the happiest day of his life. \q1 the happiest day of his life.
\s5 \s5
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\q2 fully enjoy all that you do with each other. \q2 fully enjoy all that you do with each other.
\s5 \s5
\s2 The young woman speaking to herself \s2 The woman speaking to herself
\q1 \q1
\v 2 I was asleep, and I had a dream. \v 2 I was asleep, and I had a dream.
\q2 In it I heard my lover knocking at the door. \q2 In it I heard my lover knocking at the door.
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\q2 those men who were guarding the city walls took my robe. \q2 those men who were guarding the city walls took my robe.
\s5 \s5
\s2 The young woman speaking to the women of the city \s2 The woman speaking to the women of the city
\q1 \q1
\v 8 You young women of Jerusalem, \v 8 You young women of Jerusalem,
\q2 I want you to take an oath \q2 I want you to take an oath
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\q2 you will tell him that I want him so much that I feel sick. \q2 you will tell him that I want him so much that I feel sick.
\s5 \s5
\s2 The women of the city speaking to the young woman \s2 The women of the city speaking to the woman
\q1 \q1
\v 9 You who are the fairest among women, \v 9 You who are the fairest among women,
\q2 why do you think that the one who loves you is better than other men? \q2 why do you think that the one who loves you is better than other men?
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\q2 Why do you want us to swear that we will tell him that? \q2 Why do you want us to swear that we will tell him that?
\s5 \s5
\s2 The young woman speaking to the women of the city \s2 The woman speaking to the women of the city
\q1 \q1
\v 10 It is because the man who loves me is handsome and healthy, \v 10 It is because the man who loves me is handsome and healthy,
\q2 outstanding among other men. \q2 outstanding among other men.
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\q2 we will go with you to search for him. \q2 we will go with you to search for him.
\s5 \s5
\s2 The young woman speaking to herself \s2 The woman speaking to herself
\q1 \q1
\v 2 The one who loves me has come to me, I, who am like his garden, \v 2 The one who loves me has come to me, I, who am like his garden,
\q2 He has come to enjoy my charms, \q2 He has come to enjoy my charms,
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\q1 \q1
\v 13 You who are the perfect one, \v 13 You who are the perfect one,
\q2 come back to us, in order that I may see you! \q2 come back to us, in order that I may see you!
\s2 The young woman speaking to her lover \s2 The woman speaking to her lover
\q1 Why do you want to look at me, the one who is perfect, \q1 Why do you want to look at me, the one who is perfect,
\q2 dancing between two rows of dancers? \q2 dancing between two rows of dancers?
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\q2 I want it to be as if it was wine flowing over our mouths and teeth. \q2 I want it to be as if it was wine flowing over our mouths and teeth.
\s5 \s5
\s2 The young woman speaking to her lover \s2 The woman speaking to her lover
\q1 \q1
\v 10 I belong to the man who loves me, \v 10 I belong to the man who loves me,
\q2 and he desires me. \q2 and he desires me.
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\s5 \s5
\c 8 \c 8
\s2 The young woman speaking to her lover \s2 The woman speaking to her lover
\q1 \q1
\v 1 I wish that everyone knew that we love each other, just as they all know that I have a brother, \v 1 I wish that everyone knew that we love each other, just as they all know that I have a brother,
\q1 my own brother, who nursed at my mother's breasts. \q1 my own brother, who nursed at my mother's breasts.
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\q2 to where our mother, who taught me so many things, lives. \q2 to where our mother, who taught me so many things, lives.
\q1 I would like to take you to our mother's house so I could make love to you there. \q1 I would like to take you to our mother's house so I could make love to you there.
\q1 That would be as delightful as juice squeezed from pomegranates, as wine mixed with spices. \q1 That would be as delightful as juice squeezed from pomegranates, as wine mixed with spices.
\s2 The young woman speaking to herself \s2 The woman speaking to herself
\q1 \q1
\v 3 Oh yes! He will put his left arm under my head, \v 3 Oh yes! He will put his left arm under my head,
\q2 and he will hold me close with his right arm. \q2 and he will hold me close with his right arm.
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\q1 \q1
\v 5 Who is that woman who is coming up from the wilderness, \v 5 Who is that woman who is coming up from the wilderness,
\q2 the woman who is leaning on the man who loves her? \q2 the woman who is leaning on the man who loves her?
\s2 The young woman speaking to her lover \s2 The woman speaking to her lover
\q1 I woke you up when you were under the apricot tree \q1 I woke you up when you were under the apricot tree
\q2 at the place where your mother conceived you, \q2 at the place where your mother conceived you,
\q2 the place where she gave birth to you. \q2 the place where she gave birth to you.
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\q2 she would refuse. \q2 she would refuse.
\s5 \s5
\s2 The young woman's brothers speaking among themselves \s2 Brothers speaking among themselves
\q1 \q1
\v 8 We have a younger sister, \v 8 We have a younger sister,
\q2 and her breasts are not large yet. \q2 and her breasts are not large yet.
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\q2 we will decorate her with bits of cedar wood. \q2 we will decorate her with bits of cedar wood.
\s5 \s5
\s2 The young woman speaking to herself \s2 The woman speaking to herself
\q1 \q1
\v 10 My chest was previously flat like a wall, \v 10 My chest was previously flat like a wall,
\q2 but now my breasts are big like towers. \q2 but now my breasts are big like towers.
\q1 So I am delightful to my beloved. \q1 So I am delightful to my beloved.
\s5 \s5
\s2 The young woman speaking to himself \s2 The woman speaking to herself
\q1 \q1
\v 11 King Solomon had a vineyard at Baal Hamon, \v 11 King Solomon had a vineyard at Baal Hamon,
\q1 and he rented it to people for them to farm it. \q1 and he rented it to people for them to farm it.
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\q2 so allow me to hear it, too! \q2 so allow me to hear it, too!
\s5 \s5
\s2 The young woman speaking to her lover \s2 The woman speaking to her lover
\q1 \q1
\v 14 You who love me, come to me quickly; \v 14 You who love me, come to me quickly;
\q2 run to me like a gazelle or young deer, \q2 run to me like a gazelle or young deer,