From 4f536095391c18798265aa01472da9e2eb8cac90 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: bobj Date: Fri, 15 Nov 2019 13:32:26 +0000 Subject: [PATCH] Ch 16-18 edits/corrections --- 18-JOB.usfm | 29 ++++++++++++++--------------- 1 file changed, 14 insertions(+), 15 deletions(-) diff --git a/18-JOB.usfm b/18-JOB.usfm index fa5c6c35..bb1f258a 100644 --- a/18-JOB.usfm +++ b/18-JOB.usfm @@ -1444,8 +1444,8 @@ \v 6 But now, if I talk, my pain does not decrease, \q2 and if I am silent, my pain still certainly does not go away. \q1 -\v 7 God, you have now taken away all my strength; -\q2 you have destroyed all my family. +\v 7 God, you have now taken away all of my strength; +\q2 you have destroyed all of my family. \q1 \v 8 You have shriveled me up, \q2 and people think that shows me to be a sinner. @@ -1474,7 +1474,7 @@ \s5 \q1 -\v 13 It is as though I were a target, and that people were surrounding me and shooting arrows at me. +\v 13 It is as though I were a target and people were surrounding me and shooting arrows at me. \q1 God's arrows pierce my kidneys \q2 and cause the bile from my liver to spill onto the ground; \q2 God does not pity me at all. @@ -1490,13 +1490,12 @@ \v 16 My face is red because I have cried very much, \q2 and there are dark circles around my eyes. \q1 -\v 17 All this has happened to me even though I have not acted violently toward anyone, +\v 17 All this has happened to me even though I have not acted violently toward anyone \q2 and even though I always pray sincerely to God. \s5 \q1 -\v 18 When I die, I want the ground to act as though I had been murdered; -I want it to cry out against those who killed me, +\v 18 When I die, I want the ground to act as though I had been murdered; I want it to cry out against those who killed me, \q2 and I do not want anyone to stop me while I am demanding that God act justly toward me. \q1 \v 19 But even now, I know that there is someone in heaven who will testify for me, @@ -1511,19 +1510,19 @@ I want it to cry out against those who killed me, \q2 as a person pleads for his friend. \q1 \v 22 I say this because within a few years I will die; -\q2 I will walk along the road to a place from which I will never return." +\q2 I will walk along the road to a place from which I will never return. \s5 \c 17 \q1 -\v 1 "My time to live is almost ended; I have no strength left; +\v 1 My time to live is almost ended; I have no strength left; \q2 those who have dug my grave are waiting for me. \q1 \v 2 Those who are around me are making fun of me; -\q2 I must always see them mocking me." +\q2 I must always see them mocking me. \q1 -\v 3 "God, it is as though I were in prison; -\q1 please pay the money in order that I may be released, +\v 3 God, it is as though I were in prison; +\q1 please pay the money so that I may be released, \q2 because there is certainly no one else who will help me. \s5 @@ -1532,7 +1531,7 @@ I want it to cry out against those who killed me, \q2 but you will not allow them to triumph over me, saying that I have done wrong things. \q1 \v 5 Our ancestors said, 'It often happens that when someone betrays his friends in order to get some of their property, -\q2 it is that person's children who will be punished for it;' +\q2 it is that person's children who will be punished for it,' \q1 so I desire that will be true of these friends of mine who are lying about me. \s5 @@ -1589,7 +1588,7 @@ I want it to cry out against those who killed me, \s5 \q1 -\v 3 Why do you think that we are as stupid as cattle and as unrighteous? +\v 3 Why do you think that we are as stupid and as unrighteous as cattle? \q1 \v 4 By being very angry, you are only hurting yourself. \q2 Do you think that everyone on the earth must leave to prove that you are right, @@ -1606,7 +1605,7 @@ I want it to cry out against those who killed me, \s5 \q1 \v 7 While they are alive, they walk confidently, -\q2 but later it will be as though they stumbled and fell, +\q2 but later it will be as though they stumbled and fell \q1 because they themselves do not pay attention to the advice that they give to others. \q1 \v 8 It will be as though they had walked into their own net @@ -1654,7 +1653,7 @@ I want it to cry out against those who killed me, \v 19 They will have no children or grandchildren, \q2 no descendants where they will have previously lived. \q1 -\v 20 People from the east to the west who hear about what happened to them, everyone, +\v 20 Everyone—from the east to the west—who hears about what happened to them \q2 will be shocked and horrified. \s5