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-\v 9 They ridicule Yahweh and say, "Who does he think that he is teaching?
-\q2 Why is he talking to us like this?
-\q1 Does he think that we are little children
-\q2 who have recently been weaned?
+\v 9 Who will he teach so that they can learn about knowledge?
+\q2 Who will listen to him so that he can teach lessons to them so they can learn?
+\q1 Does he think that we are like little children who no longer drink milk,
+\q2 and that we are like babies who, not long ago, were weaned?
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 \v 10 He continually tells us, 'Do this, do that;'
 \q2 first he tells us one rule, then another rule,
@@ -90,12 +90,8 @@
 \q2 you who mock and make fun of me!
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 \v 15 You boast and say,
-\q1 "We made a bargain with death to ensure that the power of death may not touch us,
-\q2 and to be sure of our bargain, we also made an agreement with the powers that control the place where the spirits of the dead dwell. 
-\q1 When the powerful armies comes to punish us for our sins, 
-\q2 they will not touch us, and they will not punish us, 
-\q2 because we trust in the lies we have told, and those lies make us safe; 
-\q2 and our deceitful words will protect us because we put our trust in them. 
+\q1 "We made a promise with death to ensure that the power of death, when it passes over us, it cannot get to us.
+\q2 We tried to turn our lying words into a shelter in which we could hide.  
 
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-\v 17 I will test you people of Jerusalem to find out if you will act justly and righteously
-\q2 like someone uses a plumb line to determine if a wall is straight and level.
-\q1 But because your agreement with Egypt to protect you was made by leaders lying to each other and deceiving each other,
-\q2 you will be defeated and taken away from your country
-\q2 by an army that will come against you like a flood.
+\v 17 I will test you people of Jerusalem to find out if you will act justly and righteously,
+\q2 I will measure your character like a carpenter uses a plumb line to determine if a wall is straight and level.
+\q1 And then the hail will fall! And it will destroy everything you have.   
+\q2 Your shelter will be destroyed because it is built on a foundation of lies,
+\q2 and the water from the storm will wash your shelter away.
 
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 \v 18 I will cancel the covenant that you made with death,
 \q2 and I will bring to an end the covenant you made with the place where the dead dwell. 
-\q1 But when the vast army of Assyria comes like a flood, it will pour over you; 
-\q2 they will defeat you and crush your army,
-\q2 with their great numbers and mighty power they will trample over you and beat you into the dirt. 
+\q1 But when the vast flood comes, it will pour over you; 
+\q2 and day after day it will pass over you.
+
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-\v 19 Their soldiers will come during the morning, at noontime, and at night,
-\q2 and they will carry you all away."
-\b
-\q1 And when you understand this message,
-\q2 you will be terrified.
+\v 19 When the flood comes, it will pass through and over you like the river when it overflows its banks and causes flooding everywhere. 
+\q1 When you finally understand the message of Yahweh, it will cause you to be terrified, not comforted.
+\b 
 
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