Update 58.usfm

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 \v 6 No, that is not the kind of fasting that I desire.
-\q1 What I really want is for you to free those who have been unjustly put in prison,
-\q2 and to encourage those who are treated cruelly;
-\q2 I want you to free those who have been oppressed in any way.
+\q1 Instead you should seek to free those who have been unjustly put in prison,
+\q2 and encourage those who are treated cruelly;
+\q2 and free those who have been oppressed in any way.
 
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-\v 7 I want you to share your food with those who are hungry
+\v 7 Share your food with those who are hungry
 \q2 and to allow those who have no houses to stay in your houses.
 \q1 Give clothes to those who do not have clothes,
 \q2 and do not hide yourself from your relatives who need help from you.
@@ -59,13 +59,13 @@
 \q1 what you do for others will be like a light that shines when it dawns.
 \q2 The troubles that have been caused by your sins will end quickly.
 \q1 Others will know about your righteous behavior,
-\q2 and with my glorious presence I will protect you from behind
+\q2 and the glorious presence of Yahweh will protect you from behind
 \q2 like I protected the Israelite people when they left Egypt.
 
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 \v 9 Then you will call out to me,
-\q2 and I will quickly answer and say 'I am here to help you.'
+\q2 and I will quickly answer and say, 'I am here to help you.'
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 \q1 Stop oppressing people;
 \q2 stop falsely accusing people;
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-\v 11 I, Yahweh, will guide you continually,
-\q2 and I will give you good things to satisfy you.
-\q2 I will enable you to remain strong and healthy.
+\v 11 Yahweh will guide you continually,
+\q2 and he will give you good things to satisfy you.
+\q2 He will enable you to remain strong and healthy.
 \q1 You will be like  a garden that is well watered,
 \q2 like a spring that never dries up.