From 3f8424dac36ce849be2e767dc520c3a46c3d32a3 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: pohlig Date: Tue, 20 Dec 2016 12:52:27 -0500 Subject: [PATCH] Update 07.usfm --- 20-PRO/07.usfm | 20 ++++++++++---------- 1 file changed, 10 insertions(+), 10 deletions(-) diff --git a/20-PRO/07.usfm b/20-PRO/07.usfm index d1e05a18..11bc8c4d 100644 --- a/20-PRO/07.usfm +++ b/20-PRO/07.usfm @@ -40,15 +40,15 @@ \q2 She was dressed as prostitutes dress, with seductive and enticing clothes, and she had secret plans. \q1 \v 11 She was loud and wayward, attracting attention. -\q2 She does not stay in her own home. +\q2 She did not stay in her own home. \q1 -\v 12 She searches for a man as she walks along the streets one day; on another day she stands in the market place to find a man. -\q2 At any street corner she waits for someone who will commit sin with her. +\v 12 She searched for a man as she walked along the streets one day; on another day she stood in the market place to find a man. +\q2 At any street corner she waited for someone who would commit sin with her. \s5 \q1 -\v 13 When she sees the young man, she firmly takes hold of him, and then she kisses him. -\q2 and without any shame and with great boldness, she says, +\v 13 When she saw the young man, she firmly took hold of him, and then she kissed him. +\q2 Without any shame and with great boldness, she said, \q1 \v 14 "Today I have meat in my house, because I made a sacrifice in the temple to promise friendship with Yahweh. \q2 In this way I kept my vows to Yahweh, @@ -74,18 +74,18 @@ \v 20 He filled a bag with money and took it with him; \q2 he will not come back until the middle of the month." \q1 -\v 21 So she she convinces him with her persuasive words; -\q2 because of her smooth and convincing talk, he gives in to what she wants to do. +\v 21 So she she convinced the young man with her persuasive words; +\q2 because of her smooth and convincing talk, he gave in to what she wanted to do. \s5 \q1 -\v 22 He follows her inside— +\v 22 He followed her inside, \q2 like an ox going to the place where its owner will slaughter it, \q2 or like a deer \q2 \v 23 caught in a trap, where the hunter kills it by shooting an arrow into its inner parts. -\q1 He is like a bird that flies into a trap -\q2 without knowing that it will die as a result. +\q1 He was like a bird that flies into a trap +\q2 without knowing that it would die as a result. \s5 \q1