# see

"listen" or "pay attention to what i am about to tell you"
 
# days are coming ... when I will punish

"there will be a time ... when I will punish". Future time is spoken of as "days are coming." See Jeremiah 7:32. 

# I will punish the carved idols of Babylon

"I will remove the carved idols of Babylon"

# Babylon ... her land ... her slaughtered ones ... her midst

"the people of Babylon ... their land ... their slaughtered ones ... their midst"