diff --git a/sng/07/05.md b/sng/07/05.md index a63a3c17b2..804f78a2c8 100644 --- a/sng/07/05.md +++ b/sng/07/05.md @@ -1,20 +1,15 @@ -# General Information: - -The man continues to describe the woman. - # Your head is on you like Carmel -Mount Carmel is higher than everything else around it. The man wants to look at the woman's head more than at anything else. Alternate translation: "Your head is on you like a crown, higher than anything else" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-simile]]) +"Your head is on you like a crown, higher than anything else". Mount Carmel is higher than everything else around it. The man wants to look at the woman's head more than at anything else. # dark purple -Other possible translations are 1) "dark black" or 2) "dark red." +"dark black" or "dark red." # The king is held captive by its tresses -This can be translated in active form. Alternate translation: "Your hair that hangs down is so beautiful that the king is not able to stop admiring it" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-metaphor]] and [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-activepassive]]) +"Your hair that hangs down is so beautiful that the king is not able to stop admiring it" # tresses -the clusters of hair that hang down from a woman's head - +the clusters of hair that hang down from a woman's head \ No newline at end of file