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-# Connecting Statement:
-
-Paul begins a story to illustrate a truth—that law and grace cannot exist together.
-
 # These things may be interpreted as an allegory
 
-"This story of the two sons is like a picture of what I will tell you now"
+"This story of the women and their sons is like a picture of what I will tell you now"
 
-# as an allegory
+# an allegory
 
-An "allegory" is a story in which the people and things in it represent other things. In Paul's allegory, the two women referred to in [Galatians 4:22](../04/22.md) represent two covenants.
+An "allegory" is a story in which the people and things in it represent other things.
 
-# women represent
+# One of them is from Mount Sinai
 
-"women are a picture of"
-
-# Mount Sinai
-
-"Mount Sinai" here is a synecdoche for the law that Moses gave to the Israelites there. Alternate translation: "Mount Sinai, where Moses gave the law to Israel" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-synecdoche]])
+"One of the covenants is from Mount Sinai"
 
 # she bears children into slavery
 
-Paul treats the law as if it were a person. Alternate translation: "the people under this covenant are like slaves who have to obey the law" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-metaphor]] and [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-personification]])
+"the children she gives birth to become are slaves"