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 # I saw all Israel
 
-Here "all Israel" refers to the army of Israel. Alternate translation: "I saw the entire army of Israel" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-metonymy]])
+"I saw the entire army of Israel" 
 
 # like sheep who have no shepherd
 
-The people of the army are compared to sheep that have no one to lead them because their shepherd, the king, has died. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-simile]])
+"These people no longer have a leader". The people are compared to sheep with no shepherd, the king, who has died. 
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-# These have no shepherd
 
-Yahweh speaks of the king as if he were a shepherd. Just like a shepherd is responsible to care for and protect his sheep, the king is responsible to lead and protect his people. Alternate translation: "These people no longer have a leader" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-metaphor]])