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-# as you would call the people to a feast day
+# You have summoned, as you would call the people to a feast day, my terrors on every side
 
-"as if they were coming to a feast." This speaks of how Yahweh summoned his enemies as if he were inviting them to a feast. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-simile]])
+"In the same way that you would invite many people to a feast, you have called terrors to come and surround me"
 
 # my terrors
 
-Here the people the author fears are referred to as his "terrors." Alternate translation: "the attackers I was afraid of" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-metonymy]])
-
-# on every side
-
-This is an idiom. Alternate translation: "to attack from every direction" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-idiom]])
-
-# on the day of the anger of Yahweh
-
-Here "day" is used as an idiom that refers to a general period of time. Alternate translation: "at the time when Yahweh acted in his anger" or "during the time that Yahweh displayed his anger" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-idiom]])
+Possible meanings are "the people who terrify me" or "the terrible events that frighten me."