From f2667ee0b0d97f2dfa92231a15dbeb66acefbd90 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: PaulDeYoung Date: Mon, 5 Aug 2024 17:30:53 +0000 Subject: [PATCH] Update pro/20/01.md --- pro/20/01.md | 15 +++++---------- 1 file changed, 5 insertions(+), 10 deletions(-) diff --git a/pro/20/01.md b/pro/20/01.md index 88aac6bf71..b66720d45b 100644 --- a/pro/20/01.md +++ b/pro/20/01.md @@ -1,14 +1,14 @@ # Wine is a mocker and strong drink is a brawler -These two phrases mean basically the same thing and are combined to emphasize the danger of too much alcohol. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-parallelism]]) +These two phrases are combined to emphasize the danger of too much alcohol. # Wine is a mocker -Here "wine" refers to the person who is drunk with wine. Alternate translation: "A person who is drunk with wine mocks" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-metonymy]]) +"A person who is drunk with wine mocks" # strong drink is a brawler -Here "strong drink" refers to a person who is drunk with strong drink. Alternate translation: "a person who is drunk with strong drink starts fights" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-metonymy]]) +"a person who is drunk with strong drink starts fights" # a brawler @@ -16,13 +16,8 @@ a person who fights noisily, usually in a public place # whoever is led astray by drink is not wise -This can be stated in active form. Alternate translation: "whoever drinks until they can no longer think clearly" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-activepassive]]) - -# by drink - -Here "drink" refers to alcoholic drinks +"whoever drinks alcohol until they can no longer think clearly" # is not wise -This means the opposite of "wise" which is "foolish." Alternate translation: "is foolish" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-litotes]]) - +"is foolish" \ No newline at end of file