From f1dc8d3e8bc7d15223f12aaf42f484fd7148aff2 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Susan Quigley Date: Wed, 30 Aug 2017 20:49:45 +0000 Subject: [PATCH] Fixed note. tN Issue 379 --- mrk/09/17.md | 6 +++--- 1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-) diff --git a/mrk/09/17.md b/mrk/09/17.md index 27114e19cf..7efbf6a9dd 100644 --- a/mrk/09/17.md +++ b/mrk/09/17.md @@ -8,11 +8,11 @@ This means the boy is possessed by an unclean spirit. "He has an unclean spirit" # he foams at the mouth -When a person has a seizure, they can have trouble breathing or swallowing. This causes white foam to come out of the mouth. If your language has a way to describe that, you could use it. +A convulsion, or seizure, can cause a person to have trouble breathing or swallowing. This causes white foam to come out of the mouth. If your language has a way to describe that, you could use it. AT: "bubbles come out of his mouth" -# becomes rigid +# he becomes rigid -"becomes stiff." This refers to the boy's body becoming stiff. AT: "his body becomes rigid" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-ellipsis]]) +"he becomes stiff" or "his body becomes rigid" # they could not