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 # a tumult, a tumult
 
-A tumult is noise caused by a large crowd. This is repeated to show that it will be very noisy from all the people.
+A tumult is noise caused by a large crowd. This is repeated to show that the large crowds will make very much noise.
 
 # Valley of Judgment ... Valley of Judgment
 
@@ -8,5 +8,5 @@ This phrase is repeated to show that the judgment will certainly happen.
 
 # Valley of Judgment
 
-There is no known place with this name. The abstract noun "judgment" can be translated using the verb "judge." Alternate translation: "Valley Where Yahweh Judges" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-abstractnouns]])
+There is no known place with this name. The abstract noun "judgment" can be translated using the verb "judge" or "punish." Alternate translation: "Valley Where Yahweh Judges" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-abstractnouns]])
 
diff --git a/jol/03/17.md b/jol/03/17.md
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 "When I do these things, you will know"
 
+# foreigners will not pass through her
+
+The city of Jerusalem is spoken of as if it were a woman. Foreign armies invading Jerusalem are spoken of as if they were people from another land coming through the city and doing whatever they wanted to do. Alternate translation: "foreign armies will not invade the city" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-euphemism]] and [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-metaphor]])
+