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-# Connecting Statement:
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-The last of the seven angels begins to sound his trumpet.
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 # the seventh angel
 
-This is the last of the seven angels. See how you translated "seventh" in [Revelation 8.1](../08/01.md). Alternate translation: "the final angel" or "angel number seven" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/translate-ordinal]])
+"the final angel" or "angel number seven"
 
 # loud voices spoke in heaven and said
 
-The phrase "loud voices" represents speakers who spoke loudly. Alternate translation: "speakers in heaven spoke loudly and said"
+"speakers in heaven spoke loudly and said"
 
 # The kingdom of the world has become the kingdom of our Lord and of his Christ
 
-Here "kingdom" refers to the authority to rule the world. Alternate translation: "The authority to rule the world now belongs to our Lord and his Christ" or "Our Lord and his Christ are now the rulers of the world" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-metonymy]])
+"The authority to rule the world now belongs to our Lord and his Christ" or "Our Lord and his Christ are now the rulers of the world"
 
 # the world
 
-This refers to everyone in the world. Alternate translation: "everyone in the world" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-metonymy]])
+"everyone in the world"