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 # my soul loves
 
-The soul is a metonym for the person. Alternate translation: "I love" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-metonymy]])
+"I love"
 
 # feed your flock
 
-"graze your flocks"
+"graze your flocks". In the ancient Near East, it was common to describe a woman using metaphors involving animals. In many cultures today, this can be considered offensive.
 
 # rest your flock
 
@@ -16,13 +16,12 @@ The soul is a metonym for the person. Alternate translation: "I love" (See: [[rc
 
 # Why should I be like someone who wanders beside the flocks of your companions?
 
-The woman asks this question to emphasize that she has a closer relationship to the man than other women do. This question can be translated as a statement. Alternate translation: "Tell me so that I will not need to wander around among the flocks of your companions when I am looking for you." (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-rquestion]])
+"Tell me so that I will not need to wander around among the flocks of your companions when I am looking for you."
 
 # who wanders
 
-"who goes all around." She does not want to have to look for the man. Perhaps she is afraid other men will think she is a prostitute looking for business. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-metaphor]])
+"who goes all around." Perhaps she is afraid other men will think she is a prostitute looking for business.
 
 # your companions
 
-"your friends" or "your co-workers"
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+"your friends" or "your co-workers"
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