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 # the heavens withhold the dew from you
 
-The dew that appears at night is spoken of as if it formed in the sky and fell like rain. The sky is spoken of as if it were a person who refused to give a present or a parent who refused to feed his child. Alternate translation: "the sky does not allow the dew to fall" or "no dew forms" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-metaphor]])
+"the sky does not allow the dew to fall" or "no dew forms"
 
 # the earth withholds its produce
 
-The earth is spoken of as if it were a person who refused to give a present or a parent who refused to feed his child. Alternate translation: "the earth does not allow food you grow" or "no food grows" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-metaphor]])
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+"the earth does not allow food you grow" or "no food grows"
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