diff --git a/rev/01/14.md b/rev/01/14.md index 3e543231eb..80f1e1eac7 100644 --- a/rev/01/14.md +++ b/rev/01/14.md @@ -1,6 +1,6 @@ # His head and hair were as white as wool—as white as snow -Wool and snow are examples of things that are very white. The repetition of "as white as" emphasizes that they were very white. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-simile]] and [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-doublet]]) +Wool and snow are examples of things that are very white. The repetition of "as white as" emphasizes that they were very white. # wool @@ -8,5 +8,5 @@ This is the hair of a sheep or goat. It was known to be very white. # his eyes were like a flame of fire -His eyes are described as being full of light like fire flames. Alternate translation: "his eyes were glowing like a flames of fire" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-simile]]) +"his eyes were glowing like a flames of fire"